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I was really getting into this story until it stopped all of a sudden! Are you going to finish?

Amiti

The initial concept is good but I was a bit unthrilled with how rushed the piece was written. I was quite intrigued with a completely different type of universe that you placed Sango in, but with all of the broken sentences this story could have given so much more. Take your time when you write and really utilize more description to set the tone of the atmosphere. It would have really been enjoyable if you could have milked the bar scene for all it's worth. =)

i like this it is a good story. i cannot wait until the next chapter

Very nice. Please finish

Hi there!!!
This is so awesome I love it!

I liked the fic even though it was short but you did say it wasn`t the full chapter so makes sense.Well can`t wait for the next chapter so update soon.
LaTeRzZ!!!!