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by SayuriNakamura

schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. I like how you've done this. My question is, did I miss it, where is the Shikon no Tama? update soon!!!
person madmiko
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a great start!! I like the way you ended things in the Feudal Era for her. So, she's going to have to go through the Spirit Egg thing, huh? After that, will she meet up with the spirit Detectives and perhaps join them? Can't wait to see their meeting. Will she maintain her miko powers? Or will she have new ones? Do you have a pairing in mind for her? Since she actually pretty much gave up on Inuyasha right before she died. (You know me -- I always LOVE a good Hiei/Kagome story!! And since I enjoy YOUR writing so much, I'd love to see this one go that way -- it's bound to be GOOD!) It will be interesting to find out what Inuyasha has been doing since she died. (The poor baka. It kind of serves him right, though, to lose Kikyou and Kagome on the same day. He definitely found out which one really loved HIM, didn't he?) Will she get to go home to her mother, or is she going to be living in the Spirit Realm while she works with Botan? I can't wait for more of this!!
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think i really like this! it's funny to imagine that kags has to go through the same ordeal that yusuke had... it doesn't seem like a difficult thing with her personality.

much appreciation and gratitude for writing this! iy/yyh is my absolutely favorite crossover and you have eloquently written an intelligent and captivating beginning, sure to be an entertaining and wonderful story. please continue this to completion, i am eagerly anticipating your next installment!

thank you,
ginny