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by SayuriNakamura

person MIAMax
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, i truly hote to see more soon!
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job. I can't wait to see what happen next. I do hope that you update again soon.
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so looking forward to you updating this story!! It is very interesting. I really do hope though that this doesn't end up being a Kagome/Kuwabara. I don't know why, but I just don't like his character that much. However, I do love your writing and can't wait to see where you take us readers with this! Happy writing and update soon!!!
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would love to keep reading this story, can't wait to see what's going to happen
person sendosha
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. About the pairings, if you haven´t decided yet how about pairing her with Kazuma? It would fit after this wonderful chapter and while I´m a die-hard Kagome/Hiei fan Kazuma is a great guy who is always underestimated or only the "dumb" one. The only woman worth anything in the YuYu-group is his own sister. Yukina is absolutely boring, Botan is annoying, Keiko bitchy and the one I can´t stand at all. Well, it´s your story and I´m curious to see what you have planned.
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more so I hope you update asap please, and I really hope this story will be a Kuwabara/Kagome story.
person madmiko
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH, that was WONDERFUL! Beautifully-written. I really, really like her getting to know and become friends with Kuwabara. I like it when he isn't just written off as an idiot. And it makes so much sense that he would have sensed her and felt a connection to her with his spirit awareness AND the fact that he went through this with Yusuke. I hope I detected a bit more interest in Hiei than in the others from her. She seemed to spend a little more time looking him over. (I love Hiei/Kagome!!) I can't wait to find out what she tells him about herself. AND, I can't wait for her "ordeal" to progress. Is Koenma thinking of making her a detective, too? Will she find out anything about Inuyasha, Shippou, and Sesshoumaru before she is revived? Will she have further contact with the other detectives before then, too? You are doing such a fantastic job of weaving an intriguing and heartfelt story -- I will be sitting right here at my computer, checking for updates, until the next chapter!!!
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I realy starting to love this story. I can't wait to see what you have next. Keep up the great work. I do hope to see an update soon.
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
she's not doing the assignment that boton had given her, will that mess up her 'spirit beast'?
i am facinated as i read a talented author's seamless combination of the two series, how they can compliment eachother when written well.

thank you,
ginny
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really good, and a interesting start too. not too fast, flows nicely.

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