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for end only to begin again

by chicke222

schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great work, I'm really enjoying it thus far. It has been A++ so far keep it up.
person cocoke5
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh yea i love the story and can not wait for the next chapter of the story and see what happen. up date soon.
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story I haven't read anything like it and it just totally blew my mind away hope to read more of it
person Shinra
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story when are you going to update it. Are you dead or something well hope that you update it very soon I've been watching out for this story everyday just so I can read the new chapter. Keep it going.
person niceone
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
chapter 14 was great i hope you update this story fast so we all can see more great work soon!
person DAZ306
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
one punch



so not alot but I love New York is on lol
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow she showed them ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
person awalter
schedule March 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This plotline is great! Kudos!

FYI: In Japan they would have written with a brush, not a quill as you suggested in this chapter. Thought you might want to know.
person cocoke5
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story and can not wait for more and see when will kegome met sess and all them again . and they will not know her . up date soon.
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow .. that was great ...and was that the new evil the little girl was talking to or just some trouble .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel