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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I like this story so far. But there was a great, big, horrible mistake you made!
You said Asiko couldn't read but you did this --->
"I saw a list of things she had to complete on her desk while we were in meeting. I did not mean to see it but it was out in the open. One of the things on that list was for her to check on how the soldiers are trained. It also said she would train them if they weren't good enough. The men are about to get beat by a female and half will have never seen it coming."
Didn't you said she couldn't read?! O_O wow big mistake. I think you should edit this. Take it off. Really bad!
Hope you consider this. I'm trying to help.Goodluck for the rest.
You said Asiko couldn't read but you did this --->
"I saw a list of things she had to complete on her desk while we were in meeting. I did not mean to see it but it was out in the open. One of the things on that list was for her to check on how the soldiers are trained. It also said she would train them if they weren't good enough. The men are about to get beat by a female and half will have never seen it coming."
Didn't you said she couldn't read?! O_O wow big mistake. I think you should edit this. Take it off. Really bad!
Hope you consider this. I'm trying to help.Goodluck for the rest.
schedule
August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was hot .. im glad kagome is not running form him .. please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
angel
angel
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July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, don't end there!!! next chapter!! this is such a great story. *fans self* update soon!
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that is an absolutely amazing story! I am completely frazzled entranced and sucked right into the story line. you've captured their personalities almost perfectly! I have to say this the is the best story I have EVER read. You inspire me.
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME i love it update soon!
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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update like now.. please I beg of you. update.
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June 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow ... i love it ...please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now
angel
angel
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June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's about damn time that this story is being updated. I can't wait until the next chapter. Please don't put this story on hiatus again. I don't think I will be able to wait again. If it is postponed, I will discontinue reading any further updates, simply because of the fact that I have no patience left with this story. You started like five other stories before this was finished and I know you want to update them all, but you should really think about finishing one before continuing another. Your fan base will be much more loyal if you do.
Seren1tystar01
Seren1tystar01
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June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally! It's about damn time you update this story. I was so happy when I saw it on the new stories page I nearly cried. LOL. Thanks for finally posting another chapter, I hope to read more soon and not a couple months away. I look forward to her fight with Sesshy and hope that they mate afterall and then Inuyasha can freak out because you know he will and then we can hopefully meet his mate. Is she worth it??
Seren1tystar01
Seren1tystar01
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June 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that is good i cant wait to read more TTFN