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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was a good chapter and can not wait for more of the story and see if kagome can do what she was ask to do. good luck on the rest of the storyand i will be here to read it. more more more more more.
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February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow ... kagome can save she friends ...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
angel
angel
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woooooooooooooow the story is greating real good and can not wait for more of the story and see if sess come back in to kegome life good luck and be wait for more of the story. up date soon
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was sad .. but know she knows what happen to them ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now
angel
angel
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February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good job on the chapter, grammar needs tweaked a bit though. the story is intelligent and intreiging, i'm looking forward to reading more.
thank you,
ginny
thank you,
ginny
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February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo they found Kikyo......lmao
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February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like very much. Keep up the great work!
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February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you have real raw talent but most people aren't going to want to read your work if they get a bad first impression... please correct the grammar of your summary:
*The well closed when Kagome was 17. She is now 24, destiny is at her doorstep once again.*
if you write me at the address on my profile, i will help you with editing your story (but not lemons), i believe it has potential.
thank you,
ginny
*The well closed when Kagome was 17. She is now 24, destiny is at her doorstep once again.*
if you write me at the address on my profile, i will help you with editing your story (but not lemons), i believe it has potential.
thank you,
ginny