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I love this story and would like to read more. Please update soon!

Wow, I love Sesshomaru's explanation for her feelings. Hope you update soon, this sounds like it could be good.

This is very good

Please add ch 4 soon

I read this story over, and I must say I am impressed. I don't usually like to read fanfiction. I am more of a writer than a reader. But your story structure, ability to keep them in character, and use of simple literature and vocabularly to paint a vivid scene is staggering. Though I hate to admit it, in some aspects of writing, you are better than I. You should know, it takes a great deal of effort for me to admit that.

This story, I actually look foreward to seeing how it ends. Good work. And the humor from this phrase at the end of chapter 3:

‘I was being sarcastic, that was complete bullshit.’

...had me laughing for a good few minutes. The ability to tie in humor into such a serious moment as a young girl asking about the ways of the world, is quite ingenious, yet it didn't spoil the moment. Something I am curious to know. Do you have to work hard for your results, or are you gifted with natural talent?

i like sesshy rin paring, so i can read this as long as you update often.

Your writing is quite good, I'm enjoying this story.