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for Desert Princess

by SohmaStar

schedule July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Am liking this a lot. Any way you can let me know when you update again? Id appreciate it. And keep it up!
person jessica
schedule July 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOVED the new chapter!!!! hope u plan to update soon i just love this story!!!!
person Reviewer
schedule July 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG. LOVED IT SOO MUCH!! DO YOU NOT SEE THESE CAPITALS?? THAT'S HOW MUCH I LOVED IT!! WRITE. NOW. UPDATE. *IT WAS SO HOT.*
schedule June 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice start. There are a few spelling/grammatical/punctuation errors here and there. First one that comes to mind is in the first paragraph. It seems like it's going pretty fast-paced, but I'm still interested. It ought to be interesting when Sesh finds Inuyasha in Kagome's bathing room, lol.
schedule June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i really like this so far and thats great considering im a S/K girl :) please continue
person <3
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm hooked. Please do continue with this.
person TapTheMemoryBank
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is going to be wonderful please continue!
person bobby pin
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I am interested to see what's coming. Since she's the youngest child are her older sisters and brother married? I wonder how the princes are though...usually desert princes are so spoiled and self-centered, not to mention not abiding in monogamy...hmmm. More please.