rate_review Reviews

Wow soooo cool i love this story please keep going!!!

more? please??

Too bad this story was abandoned. It had a really interesting start, and I would have liked to see how it all played out. I hope you someday come back and finish it. It is sad to see a good story go to waste.

This story is also awesome, I hope to see an update in the future sometime.

ja ne till next time keep it up

OMG I LOVE ITTTTTTTTTTT!!!! please update soon!!! This is def. one of my all-time fav. stories.

Well the chapters area on the short side. But other then that, you have a truly LOVELY story here that I am really looking forward to reading more of soon hopefully :) I can't wait to see how Kagome reacts her first time alone with Inuyasha ;)

I'm loving this story so far. Please update soon!

Hi there. I think you have a pretty good idea going, but the chapters are short and the story is moving very fast. Take your time, reread it. You're getting the idea across, but try exploring your character's thoughts and feelings more. When you get to a moment, like how the King hates his daughter---how did that affect the kind of person she is? How does Kagome feel about being away from her family? Does she want to stay or go? Try getting across their thoughts more. Try and put yourself in Kagome's place, how this all is affecting her. I think if you do that, the story will be really really good.

so far, i'm really impressed with this story. i like how the characters are portrayed. the story seems very thought out. i do wish the chapters were longer though:)

Poor Kagome, not only does her Father hate her, Inuyasha claimed her already without permission. I can't wait for the next installment to see what happens.