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for Demon of the West

by SohmaStar

schedule July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really not a bad story at all. The rape wasn't too terribly graphic, it was well executed, and it seems you have a good things going here.
person perfect.doll
schedule July 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*cool. .hope you update soon*
schedule June 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hehe what is this germu speak of???? o-0 lol please continue :)
person pauly
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I really like how your story is developing and I think it's really interesting, I hope that in the future we can "see" a groveling sessh asking for forgiveness. ;)
person falien
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i do hope that you update this at some point
person snowbird
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I guess you've joined the ranks of those that write 1 or 2 chapters and then disappear. I just hope nothing bad happened in your life to cause you to abandon your stories. This one had such an enticing beginning. Too bad it will never be finished.
person KagomeºHime
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story so far! Do you have an update list for this story yet? if so is it possible for me to get on it? please email me about it.Thanks! Ja Ne!
person marcia
schedule April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it want more now
person suzie
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is a great start... please update soon
person ptbear
schedule March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. Update soon. Can't wait to read what Inuyashas' reaction is and if Kagome escapes or even wants to escape.