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An update! I'm so glad you are still writing. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I enjoyed this story immensely! I've noticed that there are reviews from 2007 & 2011. This leads me to believe this has not been updated in quite sometime?
It would be really awesome if you'd complete his wonderful story! :)

Please Update soon and also update Demon of the west on fanfiction too please and thank you.

thank you very much for updating the story is very good . i congratulate you for the beautiful way you write that possess

I do not log into this account of mine often but I know when I read a good S/K story. Especially a dark one that I must leave a comment.
So far so good for dark S/K story keep it up and update soon.

Sincerely,
Authoress smcandy

Again this story is looking up only one chapter left to read I hope you’ll update this story more often and not discontinue.

Sincerely,
Authoress smcandy

I wish the chapters were longer I hope you’ll update again.

Sincerely,
Authoress smcandy

Please update.

wow.. how old are you? You seriously don't know a single thing about the reproductive system. First of all, you can't get pregnant after your period started. Second of all, there's no way for anyone to know if they are pregnant the very next day after having sex because it takes time for the sperm to travel and penetrate the egg. Third of all, how the hell would sess be able to feel his pup, nonetheless, pups if the embryo hasn't even had time to form into a fetus yet?? I know it's a fiction story but at least write something that actually makes sense! Your story was good up to point

why have you not worked on this??? please do it is great!!!!!!