rate_review Reviews

Toto...
Thanks for your opinion.... to each their own... my style of writing doesn't always have to make sense... after all life itself doesn't ... its a story.

take it as that ya know?
thank you!!

huh??? why would she want to leave the love of her life? Thats just cruel. Kagome isn't cruel. I liked the story though except for the end. I hate how it ended. I don't know if I would like for you to continue or not with that ending. More likely not with that. It was a good story and a sweet lemon even with the confusing and most cruel ending.

You write very well. Your grammar is nice and your spelling isn't atrocious like many people here who claim to be born and raised where English is dominant. Good job :D And keep up the good critiquing.

Ja!

sequel! sequel! sequel! sequel! (anterrian chants loudly) please continue this fic.

CONTINUE DAMNIT!!!!!!!!! IF YOU LEAVE IT THERE THAT WOULD BE THE MOST CRUEL THING!!!!!!!!!!
Excellent job though!! :)

Hmmm. Surprise ending. Why would she be planning to leave him forever when she finally got him?