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for Intrusion on the Innocent

by Zeryna

schedule June 14, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Please update & finish soon!!! It’s great!!

person adeaneri
schedule January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great fic. hehe i think shes taknig after sesshy a bit much. cant wait to read more
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^O^ I'm famous! Lol. Great chapter and can't wait to read the next chapter...so...when is it coming?? Pleasesssssss Hurryyyyyyyyyyy!!! *_* Though I'm still high off of Rin's actions...getting down and dirty with Sesshomaru-sama...

*sigh*

Anyways I can't wait to read the next chapter...hopefully I'll get around to updating my own stories [[writers block and I'm 2 busy]]

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xo Passing_Breeze
person oxcab
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is the best fic i ever read ^_^ update soon
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jaken could have waiting a little longer before he showed up. But that is just like him to do that.
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! My friend Passing_Breeze wasn't playing when she said this was good...its hard to find a good fiction where Rin is a demon (she is right?!) -_- Love it so far...Let me review for Chapter 1
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it don't know why I didn't come back earlier to do it!
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Please please update! Even though you have already posted chapter two! Lol. Love the story so far! I'll make sure to tell my friend to come and check this story out.
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. o_O I actually thought she was going to kill him for a momment. Did she change into a demon???? -_o I think if he had done that would she have became his mate??? Anywayz love the fic and can't wait for you to update.
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow very interesting. How is Sesshoumaru going to help Rin now? Well Rin freak out when she finds out what happens to her? I know I would. Please keep up the great work, I love the story so far, very well writing.