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for Love of the Rose Hime

by nchsmi

schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Shakes the crap out of her* OMG! *Freakin faints letting her go then begins to sob like a child* Man... all that kissing... and caressing... and and... damn Inuyasha's stomach to hell and back! *Pouts like she's been denied candy* Okay so I got all excited and then that stomach thing... and dinner sounded so nice and romantic... and yeah okay I admit it I was freakin ready to kill when Inuyasha's stomach went off LOL, but I suppose I can wait until the next chapter. *Leaves lots of candies and roses in hopes of getting a quick update* Wonderful description on the place though, cause WOW even I was like "I WANNA STAY THERE!" Hehehe. Oh one more thing... dude... I feel like Inuyasha... is there anything that family DOESN'T own?!
person KIKI441
schedule August 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i guessed hawaii because i would love to go there one day. this was
a great chapter. you do realise that in the part with sess and inu on
the plane. you had put kagome's name instead of inuyasha. hahahaha.
but anyway, will you be showing them in hawaii or are you going to
just give them some pirvacy and show what that creep heero is doing.
so i take it everything will go wrong once they get back from the
honeymoon. is heero planning on kidnapping inuyasha?

update soon because i want to know what that freak is going to
do.
person KIKI441
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you are so mean. you still won't tell us where sess is taking
inuyasha on their honeymoon. i know. it's hawaii isn't it?
anyway, wonderful chapter and i'm sure you will let us know
where they are going. right? right?
person KIKI441
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the wedding was so sweet. i can just picture little
rin standing there as inuyasha slipped the ring on
her little finger promise to love, cherish and protect
her new daughter. and inu's dress discription sounded
so lovely. i can't wait until the next chapter. also,
i knew that creep heero was up to something nasty.
person KIKI441
schedule July 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just love it. well, you could let Ban and monica get
together. it's obvious he's starting to like her. i mean
he was groping her.

this with inuyasha did sesshomaru send her the necklace? or
is it this mystery person? but like i said it has to be that
creep heero that's sending her all those flowers and expensive
gifts. nothing you anyone can say can make me believe that he
is not behind this unless you say he's not. but i believe
it's him. it's too much of a coincidence that the cleaner
that had her wedding kimono would burn down. but anyway,
i hope you update soon. i am so looking forward to when everything
comes out.

also, where is sesshomaru taking inuyasha on their honeymoon? you
never said. you can tell me. i can keep a secret.
person KIKI441
schedule June 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and what does my eyes behold not one but two chapters. so
sesshomaru has the same idea as i had. i have a feeling that
it was him but you're not saying. come on you can tell me. i
won't tell anyone. chapter 31 was great but chapter
32 washilarious. especailly the ending when his aunt and
uncle walked in on inuyasha trying to beat the crap out of
sesshomaru with the desk leg. if i was them i think i would
have fell out with laughter at the mere sight.

anyway, great two chapters you put up. so, i take it the next
chapter will be the wedding. i hope nothing bad happens because
if does it seems that the entire male cast will have to pay that
freak heero a little visit. so, hurry up, i want to see sess
kick some butt.
person KIKI441
schedule May 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh wow! this was great. and i laughed myself silly
when inuyasha told kagome about the 'where babies come
from' as told by kaede. i especially love the popsicle
show kagome showed inuyasha. i bet sess will love that
little treat. but alas, i heard the omious drums when
tokio walked in. she just has to ruin things. i understand
that she want her nephew to be protected but she acts
like he's an inept child not able to take care of himself. i
hope sess or inuyasha which would be better put her in her
place. also, where are they going on their honeymoon? you
didn't say. i wanna knnnnoooooowwwww. well, update soon.
person ayna
schedule May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
keep the excellent chapters coming they are getting better and better as they go along.
person KIKI441
schedule May 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hurray! they've worked out their problems and now they only have one
problem left. heero
person ayna
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
email me when the new chapter is up ;>