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by JayFiclover

schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg!!! Evil cliffie. I want moooooooooooore UsaxSessh. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...... the suspense! T_T!
person bebecouture
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the suspense is killing me. T_T @ Sesshoumaru and Usagi. Your portrayal of the characters is excellent. I'm enjoying this crossover. Cannot wait for the next chapter~!ô(ɁLÍM*)É
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok you asked me to tellyou what I think. I just recently joined and if this sounds offensive in anyway please let me know. First your story is really good. I like it but you are in some areas dragging it out a bit. Usagi has been wiuth Sess. for quite a while and your story hasn't really progressed very much since usagi went with sess. Well hurry with the next chapter I want to see how this will turn out.


bye! forgottensoul_218
person ldymoonluvsinuyasha (not signed in)
schedule August 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, so I look forward to your update. I know how things can get sometimes, I'm a full time mother of two and I used to be while being a mother a full time employee and sometimes dang it it was hard to find the time to write, so, update when you can and write as often as free time allows you. I'll wait patiently but...(don't let me wait too long :P ) *smiles at ya*

til chpt 61 and going...I like long stories when there good. *sneaky hahaha*
person LdyMoon
schedule August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I really hope that Usagi/Serena/Cosmos that they'll be with Sesshomaru for a little while romantically. I doubt if Naraya-sama will ever really truly change his colors or spots since he was evil incarnate from the very beginning as a lowly dang spider. lol. And Sesshomaru, tho he was supposed to be the baddest of the bad he was the one who is misunderstood the most. He can't have such an evil heart if he keeps a lil girl with him, a zombie demon slayer, since once the jewels gone he's dead and even Sesshomaru can't resurrect him. However, whatever happened to Kanna in your story, in the manga she gave the Inuyasha group a clue about the shikon no tama before she died. *sniffles* Anyway, I really love how your adding your twist with real events from the manga I love reading this kind of story. Update soon and please email me when you update, I've got your page book marked. *hee hee*
person Tsuki
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I'm the first to review.... this stori's awesome please keep posting!!!!!