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poor kagome , i hope some one can help her . he is to mean to her . and the chapter was good. can not wait for the next chapter ofthe story.

no prob
i like its going so far
please update

write more

I just read the last two chapters and I have to say-- WOW! Naraku is a mean bastard isnt he? Very well written, so angsty you can almost feel Kagome's hatred and pain towards this man. Makes me wanna hurt him...

well the story is real good and i think that is real good and can not wait for the next chapter and see what happen to kegoma and i love it can not wait for the next chapter. be wait . good luck

^^; I think that is scary Kagome is so dark insteed of all happy perky little school girl and well we all know Naruku is ebil reborn but wow I was actly picturing what he did to her and it made me shake with fear. Your doing an OUTSTANDING JOB please update again soon.And thank you for reading some of my work :blushes: I am honored I am not as good as you are but that is my hope all of my fan fics except for one has alot of rough start so it's good to know reader like mmy work it encourages me to write more. GREAT JOB SO FAR I LOVE IT AND I AM HOOKED...the darkness to the fic and your writing skills are a ture bend of something I haven't seen in a long while.

I am honored to be the first to review and I try to review everything I read-- just to encourage the good authors to keep writing. This second chapter was certainly a cliffhanger-- leaving me to wonder what Naraku has in store. But you certainly did know when to stop-- just in time to leave me drooling for more.

I have craved for months to do a slightly BDSM or spanking type story-- just cant get a plot to work for me, so reading this is a pure pleasure for me. Great job and cannot wait to see more *huggles fic and you*

oh wow i really do like the plot so far keep up ur work. and update soon. Ja Na

i love it please keep it up and update soon.

Wow this is actuly scary and intresting please update soon and keep up the good work