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I like this.. it is fitting for Kagome to be where she is, What I ant to know is will Sesshomaru be there.. of corse he will.. that how they meet right.. and will we see Naraku and kagome go at it.. I my self don't want to see it. But thats just me.. its your story and you will make it how it is to be.. I myself want longer chapters. Thats the onlything I would like to see.

I'm really enjoying your story. Usually I don't like many Kagome, but yours I like.

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Awesome job hun I'm sorry I couldn't read it earlier I was busy doing HW and all I luv it it looks AWESOME and SWEET I hope you UPDATE SOON TTYL.....

This is an...okay story...At first when I read the summery, I didn't want to read it.. but after a while, I decided 'Hey! If I don't like it, I won't review or read it again!' So I followed my inner voice and found that this story was okay. It wasn't horrid and the fact you said it would get past the torture and the Naraku part, I was relieved. I -personaly- hate Naraku, and if he was alive and in real life I would cut off his balls with a dull blade, stuff them up his ass, tkae his dick and cut it into tiny pieces with the same nife, then heal him with Sesshy's Tessiaga and do it all over again! He is the devils rejected spawn who deservse to be tortured like that for all eternity!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*calms down slowly then continues to praise author*
Well, I am glade to say that other than the previously stated things, I like this story, and hope you Up-date soon. But I would like it if you could describe things a bit more fluently...
Other than that! Great Story!
And Up-date Soon!!!!
TTYL;
megan

This has all the beginnings of a fine story and I hope to see more asap! You have style and creativity as well as a bit of mystery. It is a bit dark-- but it's gonna be good!