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Alien: cant wait for the updates

wow....just wow... Ive been waiting for a good Kouga/Inuyasha story. Ur a great writer from what Ive just read. This plot is so perfect. Happy enough to make you smile, but sad enough to be understandable and kinda real. Im a fan of Kagome, but I guess u have to break a few eggs some times. ((I'll give her up for some inu yaoi in a heartbeat. So sad. Im a fickle fan hu?) I love how u have our little fox, but hes not so little any more. And oddly i like it stil. Wornder what inus brother will have to say??? I love ur story so far and I hope to see u update soon. ((Really Really Really Really SOON! **wink** ))

Very good Inuyasha story. Good character visual and very imaginative.
Question: What's going to happen to Inuyasha?
Betrayed by two women he cared for, nearly killed again, left for dead will Inuyasha still be himself after having been hurt so deeply or will this act of tretchery(sorry if not spelt right) lead Inuyasha to have personality disorders?
Will Inuyasha still be his bostrious, loud, egotistical self or will he loose himself to the pian he faces from being unloved and uncared for?

very good!

Not a bad start to a story. There are a lot of possibilities with this, especially angsty ones with Inu's sorrow and feelings of betrayal. But it seems that Kagome has changed too much too quickly and with no real reason. Perhaps you could have her ive a reason, even if it is a bad one.

I do look forward to reading more of this story later. I enjoy Kouga/Inu pieces.

I love it! I hadn't read a good inu fic in a long time! So I will check in everyday to see if you updated...........I'll give you a big cookie.........with a cold cup of milk!!!

You sooo better update it to good to leave me hauging!! I want to see that bitch get what's coming to her I know Sessy gonna want her head for this. She most die like now. Agh I really hate her right now. You're good to get me to do that so update pleaseeeeeee!!!!! I give ya cookies!!!

OMG please write more! just so facsinating!

Well Kagome will have her hands full when retribution comes for her is all I can say. I love the story, please continue.
ja ne

The plot sounds very very interesting. I wasn't so sure about the story when I started reading it, but as I read on I got stuck into it. By the time I reached the end of the chapter I was dying to know what happened next. I liked how you made Shippo and Kirara so defensive of Inu Yasha and how they went up against Kagome.

I love the Kouga/Inu Yasha pairing. They just seem to match in an animalistic way. I don't know if it was just me or if you were hinting at something but at the end of the chapter it seemed like Sesshomaru was interested in Shippo. Will that be another pairing? If it is that would be very interesting.

I'll be watching out for your next chapter.

Frayed