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for A Delayed Dawn

by roshully

schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*hops* I love this story and i was so glad you updated it! I almost forgot I was chatting in IM with a freind cause I was so engrossed in it. Please please don't stop, this could be a novel!!!!


I'm dying to find out all the details!
person chanda
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
And the plot thickens...Love it... look forward to more.


Chanda
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!

InuYasha a rapist-- it is hard to imagine but it was handled with such grace and so was the rest of the plot. Very nice!
person Zelix
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ack, the rape scene was indeed something that pulled the pits of my stomach... i could literally feel how it must have torn poor Inu, not to mention the victim even more than him... this story is very good, and now i absolutely have to see how things go from now on, so please update again soon.
person chanda
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay I know I reviewed already, but seeing that you only have four reveiws. I thought I would give you another. You deserve more. Despite the rape scene, your story is well thought out and very well written. I do hope you update soon.

Chanda
person Anon
schedule February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please keep writing this story! It's currently my favorite!
person Zelix
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, this, is something that i am going to be watching very carefully. The idea is excellent, the way of telling it is excellent as well... and the situation you've created, oh my... talk about truly being between the rock and the hard place for poor Inu. I already have a very strong idea who his 'tag' is and... oh god, i just know this is going to get very dark before getting brighter, if it can become brighter that is.

Anyways, i'm going to be waiting for more with great interest... and even with a sense of dread, but i will still be waiting to see what happens. Update again when you can, and i'll read and review as well.
person Moon
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh my oh me, that was a thing ill tell ya, very good, i just have a question, and well i hope you can answer it. I believe this is a Inu/Kag story right, but is it going to have a nice fluffy/happy ending, i dont really care much if it has violence, rape ect. i just really want to know if Inu and Kag are going to stay together, i know that you may fell like you are saying the ending, but i hope to at the least get a little hint...

Great Story
Peace and Love ~.~
person TapTheMemoryBank
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this shows some real great potential. Good details and everything, and I'm interested to see what you will be writing next. Nice job!