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for A Delayed Dawn

by roshully

person sugar900
schedule October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have to let you know, that i'm offically addicted to your story. Do you have plans on finishing it? I love the plot and your writing style, everything is very easy to see.
person chanda
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello, I know its been a while since I reviewed. However, I just havent had the time. I love this story and am so looking forward to an update.

Chanda
person roxaas
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love where this story is going please hurry with the next chapter, i just can't wait its addictive.
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*whines* we need more chapters!! ^_^
schedule May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow such a good story and I have recommnded it to several of my friends. I like the feel and tone of it--- so well done.
schedule April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update! I'm so impressed with your frequent additions while keeping the quality top notch~!

I'm waiting for more Kagome/Inuyasha interactions, but I love that you didn't throw the characters at each other first chance you got. The build up and characterization is awesome. Kagome's character is unique to a lot of other story-Kagomes, and I LOVE her independence and lack of trust. ^.^ I'm still not sold on Kikyo being Inuyasha's rape victim..

Anyhow, noticed one typo that makes a difference: you mentioned Inuyasha's "puppy eyes" rather than "puppy ears."

Can't wait for the next update!

Keri
person chanda
schedule April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my gosh...another cliffy...sighs...lol. I wonder who has Kagome's bag...Sesshomaru...Kikyo...or Naraku...or maybe none of the above...lol. Anyways, loved it and look forward until your next update.

Chanda
person chanda
schedule April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter... so, Kagome is drafted...interesting. I aslo liked the ending. Your story is progressing nicely. I look foward until your next update.

Chanda
person Nyouko
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OhMyGod. This story is so good. You have to update soon. In chapter 13 all I wanted to do was hit Kagome becasue she is so dumb. She didin't even ask how they got thourgh the barrier.
person chanda
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it... great action scene. I cannot wait until your update...things are heating up! Love it!

Until next time,
Chanda