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schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More! Please more!
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... very intense. And sexy. I will admit, I almost stopped reading when I hit the Sango/Kagome stuff, I was never that into girl on girl action. I know I am one weird fanfic reader. (But I will admit, I find the boy/girl/boy action verrrrrrry stimulating *wink wink*) Here's hoping for more updates, cause your sex scenes could be a guide for how they should REALLY be written. Hot (very hot) yet tasteful. Lately most of the stories I've browsed are like.... 'he stuck it in and then she came.' And I thought porn movie dialouge was bad.
More Lemony goodness please!!!!
schedule July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, yum. Keep it up ~~ and I'm SO glad Miroku finally gets to play. I was so so sad when he missed all the fun in chapter 1. Our ever lovin' monk neeeeeeeds to get some, seriously.
Nicely done, can't wait for more!
person Afrieal
schedule July 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh My I'm not sure Rysh should read this (altho she's had a baby and is far from Innocent)*Not Funny Af I'm the one that outlasted that Dom that said he couldn't be challanged last year* To True coz
Keep up the great work we're off to go jump our mates *snicker*

Affie and *Rysha
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh damn that was hot! Horay for the threesome sex! IThis is really good! I look forward to a few more chapter maybe *pouts* pweaseee.
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this story!!
But that was just cruel to leave me hanging like that :'[
Please update soon!!!!!
<3
person Iyasu
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Alright! I love this! I hope there's going to be more!
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yummy yummy bondage and hot sex! Wow this was hot-- I hope this is not all cause I'm still hooked! Pleaseee pleasee-- more!
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Liked it very much.

Keep going.
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i have to have more of this storie plez write more to it.