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for Pain, hate, suffering

by WalterKraken101

person Mickii
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow sooo dark. I feel sorry for Kagome. I hope she can somehow pick back up herself. I can't wait for your next update!
person Lisa
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have to create a sequel to this. This is way too good of a story
person GSW
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please don't end there...
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW ok I thought I hated Naraku before, but I really loathe him now. Please tell me someone is going to gut him.
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, the tension is high! I love it! I mean yeah, it's sad that Sango and Kohaku died, but what will Inuyasha and Miroku believe now? And how will poor Kagome react? Will she eventually become Naraku's, since this is a Nar/Kag fic? Or will they defeat Naraku? So many questions, so little answers yet! Please update soon! ^_^
person Suniko
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know I have read this before. I always review the stories that I had read. But I notice there's none made by me. I'm sorry if I didn't review last time I read this before you update ch9.

It's afful what Naraku is doing to Kag. I love it. I love angist types of stories. I can't wait for the next update! I hope you post the next chappy soon!

Will there be more deaths? Poor Kagome I wonder who will believe her that she didn't do what Naraku want's them to believe.

Update! Update! Update SOON!

Take care,
Suniko
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY HOW DARK!!!! Typically I wouldnt read things like this but I LOVE LOVE LOVE all your work so Im going to read it hopefully I wont get too sick.
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter and please update soon as I want to see how Sango and Kagome deal with each other and how Sango acts when she realizes Kagome did not kill her brother. Thanks.
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this story is so emotional i really cant wait for your update
schedule June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no. She can't kill herself. No No No No No No No. I won't accept that. Good updates. Sorry. I've been out of the country lately and haven't checked for any updates on anything. I can't wait to read more. Take care and peace. Please update your other stories soon pretty please.