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for Be there for me

by WalterKraken101

person madmiko
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!!! Loved it! And what the heck was up with Inuyasha thinking about Kagome tending his "wounds?" Did he forget how cruel he was to her and that he's the reason she was alone and vulnerable in the first place? I hope he realizes the irony of the situation -- he yelled at the live miko to help the already dead one and now she's injured just as badly. Will he go get Kikyou and yell at her to help Kagome? (Yeah, right.) Will he tell Kagome how much he loves her? (Yeah, right, again.) BUT, Kagome has earned the respect of someone a lot more powerful, and LOYAL, and appreciative, hasn't she? Gotta love it!! I REALLY can't wait for more -- this story is awesome! (Will Hakudoushi try to kidnap her again? Will Sesshoumaru start traveling with Inuyasha's group?) So many questions -- so many possibilities! Yay!
person Anon
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person madmiko
schedule January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is getting good! Wonder what hakudoushi's plans for kagome are? Sess came to her rescue, but doesn't care for her, huh? Who's he fooling? Inuyasha's sure being unfair to her, and his little bout of self-pity was, well, pitiful. Looking forward to more!
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i like.plaese update soon it sounds good.keep up the good work Ja Na
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
gaw I luv it why you stop there !!!!! UPDATE ASAP!!!!!
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah I like where this is going.
person madmiko
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A familiar beginning, but with a little twist -- I like it. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
person DAZ306
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice not bad. No spelling(unless it's the name of the werid looking boy) but no misspelled words. Rin dont talk in THREE person like some of the storys. inuyasha still a dumb ass. and Kagome still runs off without her bow. This is nice tho. Keep writing.!!
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O I can't wait to find out what happens next!! Please update again soon.

If it's not too much trouble, could you email me when you update? I don't want to miss this story. It sounds like it will shape up to be a great one!!

Until we meet again.