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NO you are not going to do what I think you are going to do are you?? Why Why WHY?

Anyway I love it...love the story and I cant wait to see if you are going to do what I think you are going to do.

Very interesting chapter! I'm glad Kagome saw Inuyasha with Kikyou when she "died." I think he may be surprised by her lack of enthusiasm to see him when he returns to the village. How stupid is he? Of course, we all know kagome would never be mean about it, but I doubt she will greet him with open arms. He felt like his heart was missing -- doesn't that tell him something? And what was kikyou thinking about when she mentioned hopes? Was she referring to hopes that Kagome was okay, or hopes that she (Kikyou) would now retain her whole soul? What did Kikyou hope would happen? What did Inuyasha hope would happen? Kikyou told him she felt her whole soul, right? But the feeling didn't leave her? VERY interesting! I can't wait to read more about what happened. Sesshoumaru just can't admit to himself that he may be starting to have feelings for her, huh? How long will that continue, I wonder? Or, what will have to happen to change that? Obviously, they need to spend some more time around each other so he can get to know her better, and vice versa. And what kind of evil plan does Naraku have now? Is he sending Hakudoushi to kill her family? And what that mention of physical or SEXUAL coersion? Just what was that naughty hanyou thinking? This is really good! You're keeping me on the edge of my seat, and i can't wait for the next chapter!

Inuyasha is such a fucking dumbass and deserves that have his dick cut off and shoved up his ass! Alright now that I've said that.... I love your story and I hope you update soon and make something bad happen to Inuyasha please pretty please. lol.

So Kagome is really dead....no soul...then how can Sesshomaru save her w/o it??
Youre a good writer so i bet ull come up w/ something to surprise us and set u apart from others

Okay. Inuyasha is a jerk. What he just did is unforgivable. Kagome was DYING, and was in extreme pain, and he went to Kikyou instead? Even if he and kikyou are lovers (and she's DEAD!!), and kagome is just his "beloved friend," she was injured far worse and needed him more. He wasn't even there for her at the end. That's not the act of a true friend. Heck, he could have taken Kikyou back with him and bandaged her up after giving Kagome her pack. And, what happens now that Kagome's soul is all in Kikyou? Now THAT is an intriguing turn of events!! When Sesshoumaru revives Kagome, will the WHOLE soul return to her and leave Kikyou a pile of dirt and bone? (Oh, I HOPE so!) I would have to think that is highly likely as a result of Tenseiga's power. Did Inuyasha not consider that possibility? If so, he might have been a little more anxious to spare Kagome the pain of dying. Yes, the more I think about it, the more I REALLY like that scenario. It would serve inuyasha right to lose Kikyou because he sacrificed Kagome. I definitely hope Kagome remembers how little he valued her love and friendship that he would just toss her away like that. I love Sesshoumaru's stoic waiting outside. Now, HE is an honorable demon to follow them and use his power to revive her when he didn't have to. I am so excited, and I just can't wait to see what happens next!!! I hope you can write more SOON!! Great fic so far!

INUYASHA SUCKS!!!! How can he call himself her friend and just let her down so ofen? He sucks!

Nice start. I like to wait until there are a few chapters up before I review so I can get a general feel for a story. So far, the general use of description and dialogue is well rounded. (As I'm sure it will continue!)

Of more importance to me, however, is the character developement. The inner machinations of the characters is the most important part of a story for me. If I can't understand WHY they're acting the way they are, then I won't appreciate the outcome. Inuyasha being a general ass in the beginning is now being slightly toned down. He didn't actually abandon Kagome, as he didn't take off until Sesshomaru told him he'd ensure she didn't die.

Now, something I wonder about him going to Kikyo was how you described him following the soul collectors like a 'zombie'. Was that an intentional inference to him being controlled, or just a symboloic mention of how he follows her blindly without thought. (I do tend to discect every little thing,sometimes too much. Just a habit)

Kagome saving not only Rin, but also Jaken has me wondering as well. Considering in the anime Jaken became so loyal to Sesshomaru because he saved him, will Kagome now rate the same respect?

Oh...One last thought. Since Kikyo now possesses an entire soul, Tenseiga won't work on Kagome. Her soul is already gone. I wonder how Sesshomaru will go about saving her, as his honor will demand him revive her as promised. Not being a witch, I don't imagine he has the power to take the soul out of Kikyo and give it back to Kagome. I suppose he could get one to do it, but then he'd have to fight Inuyasha on that. Assuming, of course, Inuyasha is going to turn completely evil and decide to keep Kagome dead rather than loose Kikyo.

That's all for right now. I don't expect answers...I'm willing to wait for the story to unfold. Just indulging in a little contemplation.

More more more thats all i have to say. I like it!

wow that was sweet please update soon

OMG!! I want Naraku and Hakudoshi DEAD DEAD DEAD. How dare they hurt Kagome. You battle scene was wonderful the blow for blow action drew me into the story.