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for Be there for me

by WalterKraken101

person AIdeen
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved it!! so good place up-date again soon!! have to know what happens next!!!
person cocoke5
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that chapter was will good and i can not wait for the next chapter and see what happen when kagome founds her family and will she go to naku and get herself to him free will and save her family. or will she have help from sess and koga. i have to wait up to you up date the story . it is sooooooo good. good luck. up date soon.
person madmiko
schedule February 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That came as a complete surprise, you rascal! Kagome left with KOUGA! Inuyasha will find out what's going on, though, since he's gone to her house. What will happen when Sesshoumaru catches up with Kouga and Kagome? Is Kagome planning to ask Kouga to help her? And just what ARE Naraku's plans for her? This is getting good! Can't wait for more!
person cocoke5
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i can not wait for the next chapter ofthe story and see what happen to kagome mother and brother grandfather. and will kagone get there on time. up date soon the story is real good and l loveit.
person DAZ306
schedule February 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's STILL not better. I mean damn the pale ugly kid. The half breed is ugh I cant find the words but it's detest me to the fullest!!
person catseye
schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like reading this story and have been waiting impaciently for this chapter.
By the way: If you are referring to the Mother of Kagome, you should use Mrs.
Miss is traditianally reserved for the unmarried. She was married, even if she is now a widow.
Miss can be used for addressing female teachers in Britain; regardless of their marital status.
person DAZ306
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!?!? DONT LET THE MAMA GET HURT I BEG OF YOU!!?!?!?


My god that little brat.
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...it seems as if Sesshomaru is divided. I'm more interested in the mention of him justifying taking kagome as a mate because his father did, then reneging on that as he's also reminded that he fell because Izayoi wasn't able to defend herself. So...that kinda tends to lead to the insinuation that if Kagome proves herself capable of defending herself then she'd be worth it. That's just my opnion, anyway.

The whole hanyou issue was also brought up. I wonder how that is going to play into the plot.
person madmiko
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eek! Poor Mama! Wicked cliffhanger. (Nice!) I still think Kagome let Inuyasha off too easy. He'd better be swimming in guilt and remorse after that. Sesshoumaru's thoughts about his father were interesting and revealing. And his decision about Kagome, too. Will he be the one to come across her first after she finds out about whatever it is that's happening on the other side of the well? She will definitely need someone to "be there for her" then. Can't wait for more! (Still wondering about her and Kikyou and the shared soul.)
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NO!! I knew it! WOW poor Kagome.