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for Be there for me

by WalterKraken101

person PurinsuArashi( Aka: Storm , Not logged in)
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! lol! I mean normally I am the type og guy you find reading Yaoi.
But seeing as most are all the same and being updated less and less(At least the pairings I like best)
I decided to try this, great story!

It was so funny when Sesshomaru was thinking 'Ridiculous' while he kissed her, thats so like him!
Most might not think so, But I think it is, if he ever gave in to such an indulgence,
he would think such things then try to make since of it, lol!

Ummmm, thank you for letting us read you're story,
ill be waiting for th next chapter!
like I said normally I'm a very ~Blush~ gay guy, but I love to read, and
well... I like love/action stories, lol!
Even my partner likes them from time to time, and he is a cold hearted stiff =P

Again thank you for sharing your Fan-fiction with Us all!

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person madmiko
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
EW! Naraku is one sick hanyou. It's bad enough to plan to rape kagome, but to want to do it in front of her family -- ick! I was surprised by Kikyou's words and also by Inuyasha's guilty feelings. It's about time they acknowledged what all she has done for them. (And you know, I've never read a fic before that mentions the time Kagome saved Kikyou in that cave. Good for you!)
person InuYoukai
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great Story so far. Keep it up.
schedule February 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! That was gross what Naraku did. I hope be dies a horrible painfilled death.
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice action scene. I could follow it in my mind's eye. THat nasty little prick (Hak) needs to get his head stomped. Though, I suppose it is good Sesshomaru didn't manage to eat him. Talk about food poisoning.

SO...Sesshomaru showed up to save the day and Kikyo is now dedicated to helping Kagome. Or is she. That is one woman who's motivations is never clear. As not much is said on her inner thoughts, one can only wonder.

writer's block huh? Nasty stuff. Take two tylenol and try again in the morning. LOL
person millerha
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It just keeps getting better and better^_^ Can't wait to see what happens next!!
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whew! I couldnt take it if her mom died. Great Chapter cant wait for the next one.
person millerha
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow your story is really good so far!!^_^ Can't wait to see what happens next!! Please update soon!!
person CyndeLou
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is getting pretty interesting. I love it. Keep up the good work and I can't wait until the next chapter.
person madmiko
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! I like the way Hakudoushi took out Kouga, then, of course, it was up to Sesshoumaru to revive him and save the day. But, :ew! He ATE him? LOL! (Not that it worked.) Gee, Kikyou seemed a little too gleeful at the thought of Kagome abandoning Inuyasha. (Bitch!) And her excuse for joining the group seemed pretty lame, too. Not that Inuyasha would ever see that. So, he's feeling guilty? He SHOULD. grumble grumble *baka hanyou* grumble *no sense* grumble *necrophiliac* grumble. Sess is definitely showing more closeness and caring for Kagome now. But she is going to have to give herself up to save her family, isn't she? Loving it! This is good!