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for Be there for me

by WalterKraken101

person Jazmine
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the best stories I've ever read. Keep up the good work!
person DAZ306
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwww that is nice.
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. Please continue this. It is very well written and I love reading everything that happens. Good job so far.
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeaaa he is gone ... i hope he can save them .. please update soon i would love to read more ..later for now

angel
person madmiko
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was just inspired! Loved the idea of Inuyasha's soul letting Sesshoumaru wield Tessaiga, and it was a nice touch for Kikyo to encourage Kagome, too. (Though, technically, shouldn't her soul have stayed in Kagome since Kagome is her reincarnation?) Anyway, it made for a pretty scene. Nice job!
person Kawaii_Kilala
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am sad that i never got to review this before hand...but i can now! well...this is deffinatly a twist in my usualy preferance in stories...
im sad that my name sack, kilala/kirara was killed, but happy that naraku is dead, and yet sad because inuyasha and kikyo -who i dont usualy like- is dead as well...
happy because miroku and sango are alive, though wounded...
and sad that kags's family is dead, and buyo is dead for sure, but happy that they might be revived...
i wonder if sesshy and kags will fall in love later? and how many chapters are going to be in this sotry?
i hope allot more, and maybe a new villan of your makeing?
perhaps?
well...thats all for now...
TTYL;
megan
person DAZ306
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo DAMN MAN I feel sorry for her but then again they might live........I hope so.
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man .. what is up with the soul collectors.... please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooo....I can't wait for the next chapter!!

This is really really good and has me on edge.

I want to know what happens!
person madmiko
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Action-packed chapter! I liked the organs in the jars -- borrowed from some Egyptian customs, ne? Nice idea. Whew! Let the bodies hit the floor!