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for Be there for me

by WalterKraken101

person Kya77
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked your story. I look forward to the sequel when it arives. Keep up the good work.
schedule April 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DAMN good luck on the dental surgery. I know the feeling...OUCH!!! The chapter was a bit off but I guess pain will make you do crazy things...lol JK. As always wonderful I cant wait for the rest.
person cari
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
she used the jewel 2times didn't she? during the final battle with naraku (ch18) she wished Sesshoumaru's arm back so he could fight and then you have her make the same wish on the jewel in the hut which angers souta (ch21). maybe you should rewrite the last chapter (21) so the story will make sense again? other than that its really good :)
person DAZ306
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have no words really rite now because I'm still crying.
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww i feel sorry for the lil guy lol. sess is an ass. kags is totally pathetic at the moment but its understandable with all thats happening. i love it! and i think your doing a good job, so keep it up and post the next chapter soon.
schedule April 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man .. i hope he does calm down .. please update soon i would love to read more.. later for now

angel

ps hope you feel better .. later
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
umh isn't the prologue the chapter before chappy 1 and if i'm not mistaken isn't this chappy 20. oh well it's your story you can do whatever you want. i like it so far can't wait for more.
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow that was one hell of a prologue... i love it im sad the he could do nothing for her mom but was able to help others ... and that sess was happy that inuyasha was there for is pack in till then end like a true inu should .. please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

angel
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great and totally sad
person cocoke5
schedule April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good story and can not wait for the end of the story good luck up date soon.