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for Sesshoumaru's Secret Life

by lyiint

schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice ending, bittersweet knowing that the suffering isn't over for Sesshomaru. I try to review to encourage writers to go on. I meant that this was a very good story. I don't review stories that I don't like or are full of grammatical errors. I enjoyed the idea, and that it was so different from others, who simply make it an AU, where Sessh. is female. This is the first time that I had ever seen one where Sesshomaru had been a woman, but forced to hide it. You told a good tale that was original, made me feel sorry for Sesshomaru and Miroku, and made me check regularly for your updates. (Should have checked more though, maybe I'd have reviewed more often and gotten first place. lol)
person Minami
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AAhHHHHHHHH! Im getting so excited!! Your E~VILLL!!
person Minami
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! I WIN!!! HA!(lol) Big hugs and Kisses back!!! I love this story and I know it will be one of the one's i read over and over again. I hope to talk to you again also. Hmmmmmm I wonder what you'll do next!!!
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sesshomaru! She can't forget Miroku!
person Minami
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!..................thats all i have to say. (lol)
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the reasoning that went into selecting a victim to kidnaip, with logic behind each rejection. Whether or not you knew who you wanted from the beginning, you definitely made it reasonable not to have it be the pups, miroku or Kagome. Nice thought into your work.
person Minami
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Definitely a conspiracy. lol or it is alive and just takes pleasure in pissing me off!! lol! Im glad Kougas feeling better!!! YAY!!
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the battle between Naraku and Sesshomaru. And the revelation finally came out that it had been Sesshomaru's mother who had done this to her. Very nice update. You do this so fast, it amazes me.
person Minami
schedule February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL I know I think mine is just here to drive me crazy, it just up and does whatever it feels like!! Anyway i cant wait till they find Naraku and tear him up, and GO KOHAKU WOOOOOOOOO!!!! LOL
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry it's been a while since I reviewed. Still enjoying where this story is going. Wonder why Naraku/Anoki wants Sesshomaru when he seems to have what he needs right there. I guess I'll have to read on to find out.