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October 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I love the story, i hope you keep writing. The storyline and plot is good. Your words flow and it's great to read
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October 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really interested in how this is going to go!
Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Can't wait to find out what happens next!
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December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
all i can say is WOW!!!! i realy love it n i dont love storys that easy i can wait till u update pls be soon i realy cant wait i am itchin to read the rest ov the chaps soooo plz update soon i realy love this story!!!....
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love these type of stories with kag and shess. i'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this is...okay. I'm not entirly sure about the sesshy and kagura thing, but I like the rest!
Could you explain if she has Always been a demoness or if it just happened or something...and also could you describe things a bit more thoroughly than you have been? Like the time of month, her hieght, history, and where is the half-breed in all this? And what does Ryu look like? Is it only his eyes that look like Sessy's, or his body too? And does Kags have all of the demoness' attributs, like fangs, claws, pointy ears, 'tatoos', and other demony things? And is her whole family demons? And what about wealth? Is Sesshy wealthy? Is his mom & dad still alive? Is Kags wealthy? Is her dad still alive?
These are a few things I can't help but wonder about *rubs chin while thinking* lol>
Also, shouldn't Sesshy have smelled she was pregnant? And can she transform into her 'true' self...also, if you can or will, tell us about things that wont come up in later chapters? I garentee that it will make your story better than it is! Answering questions is also a good thing, too, cause then your reviewers will feel privlaged that you took the time to read their reviews, and therefore, keep revviewing! It also builds a relationship between reader and writer...
Those are more things I am wondering about, and telling you about...
Other than those...
Up-date soon! Please! This is a promiseing story!
TTYL;
megan
Could you explain if she has Always been a demoness or if it just happened or something...and also could you describe things a bit more thoroughly than you have been? Like the time of month, her hieght, history, and where is the half-breed in all this? And what does Ryu look like? Is it only his eyes that look like Sessy's, or his body too? And does Kags have all of the demoness' attributs, like fangs, claws, pointy ears, 'tatoos', and other demony things? And is her whole family demons? And what about wealth? Is Sesshy wealthy? Is his mom & dad still alive? Is Kags wealthy? Is her dad still alive?
These are a few things I can't help but wonder about *rubs chin while thinking* lol>
Also, shouldn't Sesshy have smelled she was pregnant? And can she transform into her 'true' self...also, if you can or will, tell us about things that wont come up in later chapters? I garentee that it will make your story better than it is! Answering questions is also a good thing, too, cause then your reviewers will feel privlaged that you took the time to read their reviews, and therefore, keep revviewing! It also builds a relationship between reader and writer...
Those are more things I am wondering about, and telling you about...
Other than those...
Up-date soon! Please! This is a promiseing story!
TTYL;
megan
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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow every different, be interesting in how she tells sesshomaru. Well Good luck with the rest, Look forward to reading the next chappie
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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story but I would really want to know what happens next because it's very good!!!!!!!!
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January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! The story is going to be great I just know it!! Please continue writing this one.