AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Cupid's Blunder!

by chicke222

person Crysan
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update again soon!
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what will make him angry...;-) I hope its something that Kags does, like go through the well...and Sesshy would get angry cause she would have left... I wounder when she will notice his mating mark...I wonder why Sango didn't notice it in the hot spring... This is going great! Up-date as soon as possable! Please!?
TTYL;
megan
person DAZ306
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
my face :O
person Crysan
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooo goody Please Update soon!!!
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg update like right now. at least before 10 tonight cuz i wanna know how everyones going to react to this little added bit. come on please pretty please. im beggin here! well good job and keep it up.
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH! Cupid is a bad 200 year old boy!
I am still slightly disgusted about that JAken and Kikyho part! Yuk! HOW would want to kiss a frog!!??
And, since she drank his blood, and she is a miko...will that turn her into anything 'special'? Besides his mate? Like a Kitsun/Neko/Inu or Ookami...which wouldn't be a part of this...but...eh...*shrugges shoulders*
Up-date soon! I can't wait! This is a twist in the usual stories! A fresh new breed of story! I applaud you!
TTYL;
megan
person Sinful
schedule February 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story....it keeps getting more and more interesting
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I just deleted my own review, how stupid can one be?! I am new to the site and still not sure about how many things work, yet this was ridiculous.

Oh well, sorry about that.

Your story's going pretty well! Poor Kagome-chan, not the mots pleasant way to lose one's, ahem, 'virtue'. *laughs* Yet since it's fiction, and she did it with one hell of a sexy Sesshoumaru, and she didn't sound as regretful as one would have expected (probably because she's been having a crush on Sesshoumaru all this time in secret, I KNEW IT!) it's definitely not so bad (i mean, it could have been JAKEN... that would have been bad... I wonder what he and Kikyo are doing?)
person Sinful
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it....keep up the good work!!!
person JadedInu
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I almost fell off my chair laughing at this one!! Many toad babies (LOL)

Keep up the good work!! I love the story line and the fact that the lecher is the only "sane" one!!