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by szaugg

person gen
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i didnt know i could review, not having been logged in.
i guess aff changed policy again. returning to allow non-logged in reviews.

i wanted to say, VERY NICE!
your pic of sesshoumaru as a control freak except when dealing with inuyasha
is very pleasing. it is sess in denial. i love it.

thank you for writing. and i shall be checking this daily.
one question, why is this not in the sessxinu section?
not that it matters....
person Princess Sin
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi,
i just finished reading all five chapters of your
story and it was great. ha, that was certainly a
blow to his ego to know that he is meant to be on
the bottom. i am so looking forward to the next
chapter.

also, i was wondering if you were still going to
make this a threesome with miroku. the reason
i ask is because with sesshomaru's temper i don't
real think he will share his mate with anyone
especially a human. i mean look how close he
came to killing kagome. so, i say, and this is
just my opinion now, you should let it just be
a sesshomaru/inuyasha story.

anyway, update soon. please
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yet again, you have impressed me with your storyline. You can't help but feel a little sorry for Inuyasha to start with except that... well, he seems to not understand the true balance of power. lol. It's not only the seme! I'm eager to see where this is going. I love your writing style. It's coherent and you can always pull a laugh out of me. It's great! Looking forward to more! Here's crossing fingers for more Sess/Inu/Mir.
person Xena1975
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that you started writing this story. Sesshomaru/Inuyasha is my favorite pairing.

I've read every other Inuyasha story that you've posted here. I was thinking of e-mailing you to ask if you were ever going to write this pairing but now I don't have to.
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You never fail to come up with unusual stories. I can't wait to read more, though if you manage to focus on all the ones you've got going on now, I will be even more impressed.
person AimeeC
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...

Wah. Alright, can I hope for some kind of awful accident to befall Sesshoumaru some time in the near future? That was *awful*. I think I've kind of gotten used to everyone being somewhat nice to Miroku and now Inuyasha-as-uke is really getting the shaft. Wah, I said, and I stand by it. Poor puppy.
person LeeSt
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so _this_ is what happens when you write something dark. Gotcha. I'll just be over here, looking for _the heart you ripped out of my chest_, okay? Yikes. (Of course, that doesn't mean that I'm not going to be reading it voraciously - just call me a sympathetic masochist. ;)

In short: very, very good and I hope that Inuyasha gets a look at the brighter side of being a uke as soon as demonly possible, whether with Sesshoumaru or with - well, _anyone_ else. :D
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! this is totally getting good. I feel so bad for Inuyasha...I wonder how much bad luck he can have. Cant wait for the next chapter!
person LeeSt
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another story? Well, that makes my day so much better. You go on and write as many unfinished stories as you like, I'll _be there_. ;) I admit that it's a little hard for me to see Inuyasha as a uke after reading your other stories, but I've loved him in that role again and I have no doubt that I'll love him this time. (It's really a testament to your wonderful writing skills that you managed to 'rewrite' my mental picture of him. Heh.) Kouga is awesome as always!

Great start to a great story!
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh No!!! Poor Inuyasha!! Poor Kagome!!! Who will get her now!? I love this idea! no matter how Inuyasha tried to be strong, he ended up the uke?! I hope he doesn't get too depressed or at least finds someone to take care of him! I love the way you had him talking to himself in his head at the end. It sounds very much like Inuyasha. Wonder who will find out next!? AH! the Possibilities!!