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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
... Well, _that_ was just about the best intervention ever. The older version of Sesshoumaru is my new best friend - I want to braid his chair and have coffee with him and take him to talk to _every dysfunctional couple I know_. Yes. He has a knack for it. This chapter was just exactly what I wanted after the last one in every particular, so kudos!
(Have to say that I'm a little worried over Sesshoumaru maybe still being a jerk to Inuyasha when he gets back - you've really made me feel the tension that Inuyasha is always under, so much so that I feel worried about him even when he's relatively safe. If I get an ulcer, I expect you to take it as a compliment. ;)
(Have to say that I'm a little worried over Sesshoumaru maybe still being a jerk to Inuyasha when he gets back - you've really made me feel the tension that Inuyasha is always under, so much so that I feel worried about him even when he's relatively safe. If I get an ulcer, I expect you to take it as a compliment. ;)
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so I am in LOVE with this story!!!! So far the whole concept of this fiction has been great! These last two chapters had me lmao! I like that the chapters are also long. I can re-read this fiction over and over. I stalk this site just for updates to this story! Now I am curious to found out how Sesshoumaru could get through the well in the first place and what has really caused Inuyasha to get so ill. I look forward to the next chapter and seeing how our lovely couple will act now that they are back in the past. Will we still hear from the future Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru because I really want to found out about that "punishment"?
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet little ending with the older versions showing how finally it will be, even if Sesshomaru does go through the well and become his regular asshole of a self. I love this story. That almost felt like an ending in itself, but I'm sure you're not done with it yet.
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I almost missed this one, because silly me couldn't keep track of which of your stories you'd last updated. *smacks self* Luckily, I reread them all every few days so the crisis was averted. ^_^
This chapter was everything I'd hoped it'd be and then some! Future!Sesshoumaru was awesome and cuddlesome all at once, Past!Sesshoumaru got the asskicking he so richly deserved, and *everyone* got a happy little look at the future they have coming to them. *loves*
...you know what the really bad part was, though? For a while there I found myself hoping that they really *would* come and take baby!Inu away to love and cuddle him as he deserves. Now *there's* a mental image to keep me up at nights... ^_^
This chapter was everything I'd hoped it'd be and then some! Future!Sesshoumaru was awesome and cuddlesome all at once, Past!Sesshoumaru got the asskicking he so richly deserved, and *everyone* got a happy little look at the future they have coming to them. *loves*
...you know what the really bad part was, though? For a while there I found myself hoping that they really *would* come and take baby!Inu away to love and cuddle him as he deserves. Now *there's* a mental image to keep me up at nights... ^_^
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey...
Uhm... it was a pretty quick update, not that I'm complaining. SO... when do you get to the juicy parts? I should tell you that you have some grammar and spelling mistakes going on in there that I think you should check out. Other than that... it was pretty good.
Keep it up and update soon
Uhm... it was a pretty quick update, not that I'm complaining. SO... when do you get to the juicy parts? I should tell you that you have some grammar and spelling mistakes going on in there that I think you should check out. Other than that... it was pretty good.
Keep it up and update soon
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lol! Sesshomaru got his ass beat by himself! Yeah! another chapter please. I love your story!
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Once I get over my incest squick I cenfess this is coming out very well indeed. Adding in the characters meeting their future selves was something of a tour de force, although rampant with paradox (for the most part, all anticipated and handled quite well). I am looking forward to Sess' reaction to his beating, since apparently he didn't accept that it was given by himself... Speaking of that, his language got a bit more coarse for him than one would expect, don't you think? But maybe that's the influence of living with Inuyasha for 500 years. And thank for allowing Inuyasha to maintain his love for his friends. I do hope he is able to keep that particular closeness with Kagome, and that Sess comes to see that she gave him much of his original emotional health. Keep it up; this is wonderfully entertaining and creative.
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I am totally lovin it so far.
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I was laughing so hard I had tears, yaaaay!!! Of course it would be Sesshoumaru that is tough enough to make a point with Sesshoumaru! This is great! Once I got past the 'paradox' issue, which obviously isn't an issue... gosh, how I have limited my thinking. I love that Inu hasn't gone all soft and submissive, even after all that time has passed. I just don't see him ever being 'effeminate', though he's often written that way. Kudos on a fabulous job with the characterizations. I was actually jumping in my seat and clapping!
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you updated this!!! I like how you handled this meeting. I am so glad that you were able to differentiate between older Inuyasha and Younger Inuyasha so that this chapter flowed without us readers having to stop and figure out which one was talking. I can't wait to see what Sesshoumaru says to himself!! Keep up the good work and thank you for writing so many great stories!!!!