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I love your story! I can tell that you have a real talent for writing. I just can't stop reading this story and I can't wait to see the update.

OMG! This chapter was so sad! I almost cried! Poor Inuyasha! I think that this is the first story ever that I have read of such a horrible event occuring in Inuyasha's childhood and as terrible as his rape is, it makes the story more real and helps to explain Inuyasha's character. I think that sometimes people forget how alone he was and that he was just a child when he was left to care for himself and this event helps to really show the really dark and often true side of life. I wonder how Sesshoumaru will respond once he learns of this. This made me think of why they have to hide their true form in the future. Did something like the past happen to the future Inuyasha on a human night? I trully looooooooooooooove this story and I look forward to every update! Hopefully I not have to wait long for the next chapter!

Awww. You're gonna let his friends try to protect Inuyasha. Actually, couldn't Miroku suck Sess into his wind tunnel, if it came down to it? I can imagine he would hesitate, wondering a bit as to whether or not it was the right thing to do, but that doesn't detract from the possibility of it, does it? When you think about all the demons and other shit he has sucked down, one dog demon shouldn't be that big of a deal. There is Sess' poison to worry about, I guess. Dear Miroku. He's such an intelligent, if somewhat reluctant, hero.

You had me going there for a bit; I was wondering if Miroku was going to offer to demonstrate masturbation for Inuyasha's benefit, and I was all set to laugh thinking of the two of them discussing techniques and different approaches and responses... Oh dear. Not sure I could have handled that with any semblence of aplomb.

Well, I think you ought to give Inuyasha a threesome in this story with Kagome, just to show him that he won't actually be missing out on anything. And besides, I'm sure Kagome would enjoy both brothers together if she really thought about it, don't you?

Sex education from Miroku to Inuyasha...that was great. I get the feeling that his confrontation with Sesshomaru is going to be interesting as well.

Ack. Hello, ulcer. This chapter slayed me in so many ways, and I can't help but be blown away by the fact that your angst is equally as powerful as your humor - or your smut, come to that. It means that I never know what's going to pop out and _gut me_ with any given chapter, but I wouldn't trade it for anything in the world.

(Also, even though Inuyasha broke my heart into ten separate pieces here, I have to say that I fell in love with your Miroku all over again. Even just being a friend, he's spectacular. :)

New chapter! Oh, pretty new chapter, how I love you. Never leave me alone again. Do not entreat me to leave thee, to refrain from following after thee - for whither thou goest, I will go, and where thou lodgest I will also lodge.

...and that's about as biblical as I'm willing to get today. Still, the sentiment is honestly felt - seeing a new chapter of this made my day, and I'll probably be using it much like a security blanket when you're actually gone. I'm particularly fond of Sesshoumaru's attempt to 'convince' himself that Inuyasha doesn't turn him on at all. ;)

(Also, I live in hope that Sesshoumaru may someday realize that Inuyasha is _scared out of his mind_. I'm getting sympathy pains over here. Yikes.)

Love this next chapter, Sesshomaru coming to grips with his lust (if not his feelings) for InuYasha, and that what excites him most is a willing mate. I was expecting it to be weeks for an update, with your Japan trip. Have fun. I'm jealous.

I like this chapter b/c it broke down exactly what each of them were thinking. The idea of Sesshomaru beat up like that is kinda funny!

Hee! I love this chapter more than candy and sunshine! Inuyasha's thoughts are sad and revealing, Sesshoumaru's thoughts are even *more* revealing and sad in a very different way, and the memory of the future relationship is still screwing them both up mentally. Lovely! *grins*

Hey! I wanted to say thanks for the review and I'll get you into my story soon! Those lines were absolute gold!