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a spanking! inuyasha is going to kill miroku. you know sesshoamru is
going to tell inuyasha who gave him the idea. but i guess the fun starts
when koga comes into the picture while sesshoamru is at the village.

your story is just too much fun to read.

(Dirty Grin) I can so picture Sesshomaru with a bare bottomed Inuyasha over his lap trying to keep a neutral expression while naughty thoughts run through his head. Hopefully for Miroku, Inuyasha wont find out were Sesshy got that absolutely marvelous idea.

hmmm. i thought there would be more of a reaction when sess discovered the rape....
but i suppose you would bring out other effects of that revelation when sess meets inu again...

sess is having a bad day, but at least he's getting good advice -
i shudder to think what could happen to kouga
it could swing either way ...
i can just imagine the conversation ... when sess asks kouga about the physicality of their relationship
and what might make inuyasha ... get hot, or hotter.. i can just imagine kouga's face. (flabbergasted and clueless .... especially if sess presents his serious face)

i like the way you use miroku here. miroku is a true friend, and i'm glad you are portraying him as such
that his real fears are brought out nicely....

as for the spanking... hmmm. interesting and clever device. whilst all that can be true, spanking can also be very erotic.... and i remember their future versions - inuyasha was blushing ("ruddy" was the word you used) -

you are sure building up the anticipation - very very nice - and thank you so much for updating
you make my fatigue almost slip away... (i've been home 2 days now, nursing an achy body and your fic updates
has been making the pain better that i'm going to work tomorrow - its tuesday night now.)

snow recommended your fic in her lj account - and used the mm reference. i also recommended your fic in my lj and said it was in the yaoi section of aff... i hope more readers come over. i llke your story indeed.

i am so looking forward to several things - the first of course is when sess and inu meets again
after all that ( i was so sure it was going to be this chappie, but having miroku and sesss meet is pretty brilliant)

awaiting more, whenever - again, thank you for updating.

i was re-reading. i really liked this chapter with sess down - for a few days anyway. gives him enough time to ruminate and focus on inuyasha.

i think i said some of the things already, but i have this smile on my face trying to imagine a few things, that is - if you would include it in your story.
i hope you would, because it has elements of humor and introspection...

kouga and sess, discussing inuyasha. i,too, see sess as one jealous guy. very possessive. extremely so. a lot of his anger stems from that fact. and he's really very funny about his emotions. sess in denial. i like the way you stress this in your fic. and of course, i like the way miroku is one sly monk.

and more reactions from sess on the rape, i guess you had larger issues to focus on
and aside from one phrase, there wasnt much of a reaction

just wanted to say again how much i am enjoying your story....

Awww! Poor Inuyasha, maybe his brother will be good to him. Hopefully, Miroku can talk some sense into him!

I am so glad that Miroku is trying to help Inuyasha in his own way. Poor Inu the tension must be killing him.

thank you. for updating. after my killer out of town, i find my entire body tired.
i logged on, hoping but thinking no way you could have updated so soon.
so thank you for proving hope exists because it does...

excellent chapter. 11 per this, but actually just 10, right - one chapter was your notes on japan.
now we see why inu is exceptionally nervous, and why friends - his real ones are so important.
we also get a glimpse of the life of a hanyou.. or if one thought of it, periods in the life of an individual, hanyou, youkai or what (sanzo of saiyuki gunlock reload claims it is all the same, and i find myself agreeing sometimes)- when one is terribly vulnerable and that there will be others who might take advantage of one...
so everyone should be careful...

but, it seems, though sess is in denial, but now accepting the truth of his fantasies, as if giving himself permission ... inu is - or starting to - think about things. i knew miroku had a card to play. he may be a lecher (you know what i mean), but he's still a monk.

i thought i'd see them meet, but that would be the next chapter, i think?
i wonder what sess will do when he finds out inu has been raped as a human....
i imagine all sorts of things... but i guess i dont know if you plan to cover it in any form in your fic...

i was awake til 4am last night, so i read you fic from start til the last chappie. i guess i'll read it again.
i do confess that i have your fic in my pc (internet can be snarky over here, and sometimes i need a fix - and the internet is acting up, so .... but i do send recs in my lj. i've mentioned your fic there. =) but i often misspell your name. but i tell the title and where to look for it should someone be interested.....

anyway... very nice. will you be mentioning the future inu and future sess again? i hope that before this fic is through, you might do that.... though it sure does not sound that way....perhaps it can be through a kagome pov? that would interesting, dont you think? maybe in 3-5 chappies?

but whatever you decide, you'll find me reading and appreciating it. at least we know for sure inu and sess survive the sengoku (did i spell the feudal era right?)... ha, nothing like knowing a little bit of the end...
=)

again, wonderful update. i'm still salivating, much like Pavlov's dog who has just heard the bell, for that sessxinu meeting.....

-jaw droppeth-

When I clicked on this story, I didn't think it would be that good - I was looking for the OoCness, mindless smut, loop-holed plot and I didn't find any of that. I was so surprised! This fic is wonderful and quite believable .. not the typical 'going into heat/180 degree change on feelings between characters' sort of thing, though I have read good ones of those too.

Point is, your story is very refreshing and I'm excited that you are able to pull off the whole thing, creating quite a plotty/smutty story (which are the best ones!). I also see that you update quite regularly, which is fantastic as we all know.

As for favorite scenes ... I really like Sesshou's point of view. He's not just kill-eat-sleep-get tessiaga. His mind is humourous without the whole 'what character is this again?'.

Also the going to the future part was incredible! I had to reread the scene when I first realized what was going on (for a minute there I thought Inuyasha was delusional or something xD). Hahaha, I laughed over that whole crade-robbing thing as I tried to imagine their faces. And then the whole Inuyasha-yasha-Sess part was hilarious, as well as Future Sess kicking Past Sess' ass.

Then of course the lusty!sess and being-sex-ed!yasha were among my favorite scenes.

I do hope Miroku will achieve something with Sesshoumaru, and hopefully not death. I don't think Sesshoumaru would actually rape Inuyasha, but this story does have an angst-twist to it x). Well, anyway, before I write a novel, I can't wait to read more updates ^^

Damn but now that hurts. I agree with Miroku that no-one should go through rape. It's damn painful and it never really leaves you. I guess that's the way it is for InuYasha. I hope Miroku can beat some scense into the damn bastard. Sorry I mean Sesshoumaru. I liked the fact that you had Sessoumaru kick his own ass. That is what we call Poetic Justice. Hell I think even his karma must hate him right now. InuYasha would go through anything, deal with any apin for the people that finally see him. They look at him and actually care that he hurts, that he was alone for so long. I love this story. Please continue.

Oh and congratulations on your trip to Japan. Differant than you thought it would be huh? I hope you enjoyed it. Have a pleasent day/night whatever!

Eeeee. Eeeee! EEEE! I thought you were *gone*, or at least packing! But you've been here, on the sly, writing fabulous chapters and *not telling me*. I'm going to have to put a bell on you or something. *hugs chapters* There were so many great moments here that I don't even know where to start. I loved the broken-resigned attitude Inuyasha had when thinking about his past, loved Miroku as deus ex machina and devil-on-the-shoulder all in one, want to hug or smack Sesshoumaru or both, and love love love *love* that I this was the chapter I finished on, because jealous Sesshoumaru imagining spanking Inuyasha is *exactly* the image I want to be left with. ^_^