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Chapter 14 was my favorite yet. I love the way you write humor, which is probably one of the hardest writing styles to do well. There's a nice balance of humor and angst (you gotta have the angst)in the story and overall it comes across as a seemingly effortless style of writing,and by effortless I mean that it's very smooth and flows well. I really do enjoy your stories, they're some of the few that have actually made me laugh out loud! I love the Miroku spanking scene, that was just great. I'm anxious to see how this story turns out and you can count on me to be a faithful reader of any of your work to come.

LOL Miroku got a spanking, I so thought it would be Inuyasha but alls well that ends well, and a kiss from sesshy is a great way to end.

Hee! Oh, goodness. Too many good things in this chapter. I loved Sesshoumaru coming down like the wrath of god, and Inuyasha going from protective to wrath of god junior was hysterical to watch. At the same time, you're still breaking my heart with Inu's past and sadness and being so *scared* all the time. *sniffs* I just hope that now that Sesshoumaru knows about it he'll... be nicer? Maybe? I can just see him being incredibly aggressively nice and scaring the heck out of Inuyasha as he tries to 'fix' him. ^_^

This chapter cracked me up, Inu and Sess all but arguing over who was going to get to spank Miroku just completely had be giggling. But there was also a scene or two in here that were very saddening. When Inu thought that Sess was going to rape Miroku and offered to take his place instead.....it just about broke my heart.

Thanks for writing for us. I've really been enjoying this and Other Side.

Caitriona

Oooooo..... I so love this story. So I shall repeat myself. More please.

Love this story and the ending of this chapter. Sesshomaru's having to get creative now that he can't injure InuYasha. Love it. Miroku had it coming, though. It was pretty dangerous telling Sesshomaru that InuYasha and Kouga were in a relationship. Anyway, enjoy Japan. I'm so jealous of you.

More!More!More!
Great Inujasha, great story!

chapter 14 was just too funny. i fell out of my chair laughing at miroku being the first
to be spanked like a little child. at the end i was thinking sesshomaru was going to throw
inuyasha over his lap and spank him but your ending worked out just a good. i can't wait
until the next chapter. this story is the best.

I am enjoying your fic very much. I wasn't sure at the beginning but I find myself looking forward to each chapter. I think your take on Sesshoumaru amuses me a lot, his mind is so full that poor Inuyasha didn't have any idea that his brother was an internal wreck. Externally, he is collected but once you reach the mind...scary. I must admit that I cheered future!sesshoumaru when he handed himself his own ass (oy, that was hard to write!) and thta might be my favorite chapter so far but there is more so nothing is very concrete.

The last chapter was hilarious and I am wondering how Inuyasha is going to react to the kiss. Thanks so much for the update and I look forward to more!

*breathes* Oh My Gods......

I just fell over laughing at the part where Sesshy feels like Mirouku mooned him as he bends over the well, took me a few minutes to recover so I could read on. I totally had this image of a battle and InuYasha is injured and someone yells for Mirouku to do something so he just turns around and moons.. This is just what I needed today!

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah!

Ok so that was really good XD Do we get to see more soon I hope????? I wish I could write spanking scenes like that-- I guess Im too shy grrr...