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by szaugg

person AlaskanBeauty
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG the suspense is killing me, I knew in my heart thought this was not ses :O} I really think he loves Inuyasha. Gawd this is killing me to have to wait for the next chapter to find out who this is in the water(even though I can guess), but can't wait to see what sessy does to him, *giggle* . You are one incredible writer I give you that. Just by the way you keep us wanting more and more. Keep up the FANTASTIC work.
person zsuzsi
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another great chapter!
I've followed you over from mediaminder. Sorry you were having such trouble there. I was thinking of trying to post a story of my own on that site, and now I wonder if it isn't more trouble than it's worth.
person Reymond
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Meeeaaannn author !!!!!!!!!!! BUT, at least, you ARE updating, you, not as other authors that didn't very often, or not at all, snif !
Well, for that, I think I have to thank you a lot ! Thank you ! Thank YOU !! THANK YOU !!!!!!

Bye !
à plus !

Merely Truth
person Sekre
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh! Hurry Sess!
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor InuYasha! I can't wait for the next chapter.
person yvonne
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 20
Don't go stay
person yvonne
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch21
hurry come back
person lunatickat
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shoot, that WAS an evil cliffie. A really good cliffie, mind you, but certainly no less evil. Naraku's plan (I think it's safe to assume rapist-Sess is really Naraku, right?) was fairly diabolical and simple. He got someone else to do the dirty work and not only took out Inuyasha's nose but set him up to be naked and alone. It was brilliant... and creepy. And even though it's a cliffie you left us with a little hope that the real Sesshoumaru will arrive in time to be the knight in fluffy armor. I'll keep my fingers crossed but yeesh, don't leave us hanging too long please. Oh, and I'm sorry to hear that MM went all weird and deactivated your stories. I'll miss the e-mails about updates but frankly you're worth the little extra effort to check AFF. I'm just glad the bad experience didn't put you off from writing. Thanks for sticking with it! You're awesome!
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*dies*
person ayonoi
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uwaaa! Cliffhanger of mega proportions! I was really sad how Inuyasha wants Sesshoumaru to truly accept him and make things easier for him but he is so afraid that his brother is just playing with him. I know Naraku is being cruel and pretty damn smart by playing that card to break the bond that is barely there between the brothers. Damn it, now I am walking on pins and needles to find out if Sesshoumaru makes it on time (and part of my is beggin "please do, please help Inuyasha kick Naraku's ass).

I think that since Inuyasha had two days to rest, he will have some energy left to fight Naraku and it is really good that he is not giving up so easily despite the destruction of the little hope he had. I think the moment Tetsusaiga works (because I doubt the sword will miss the fact that the guy IS NOT Sesshou!) he will realize that the man in front of him is not his brother.

Can I humbly ask for MORE??