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by szaugg

schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh geeze, you made me cry again. And I agree with Sesshoumaru, the whole time Naraku was stalking Inu I kept thinking "well, if Sesshoumaru hadn't always been such a jerk then maybe Inu would know the difference." But hopefully, Sesshoumaru can manage to save his uke. Or better yet, maybe Inu can save himself and feel a bit more in control of his life and a bit less like a weak little bitch.

Please forgive me for hoping that you have a late night and pull out some of that fast-updating-power and get a new chapter out ASAP. I absolutely love this story.

~Silence~
person sm
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. Anything else would be an act of cruelty. God what a cliff hanger!!
person ladytokyo
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was ssssssssssssssooooooooooo good. I swear I was shaking the whole time I was reading this. This great will you marry me!? fan freakin tastic! thank you for telling me where I could follow your story. I would have been completely crushed if I couldn't keep reading until the end.
person setoswifey
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy crap! I hope sesshomaru can get to Kagome on time. This is getting better and better. I check everyday to see if you have updated this story. I think that this chapter turned out good.
person Bibi11
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering if Kikyou was working with Naraku when her soul collector showed up in the last chapter. And the answer is a resounding Yes. And Miroku gets spanked again..lol..; maybe unjustly but it should make up for all the times he was the cause of some of Inu's problems. Inuyasha's worst nightmare is happening; all the hateful words and actions from Sess in one nasty package. Sesshoumaru gets to see and feel (thanks to Naraku) what Inuyasha has had to put up with from him. Great action chapter and a truly evil cliffy!!! What happens next??
person lynlin
schedule March 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh the suspense. I can't take it. I hope you update really soon!!!! I cannot wait! And this chapter was amazing. Don't be so hard on yourself!
person chuji
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love this story soooo much! damn, i was gonna have someone pretend to be sesshy in my own story, but now im gonna think of someting else! you've done it much better than i was going to.
I really love the way you portray inuyasha- his thoughts and reactions are so in-character. Poor Inu! I hope he's alright!
person zsuzsi
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, you love the cliffhangers, don't ya? Well, it's a great chapter. I'm glad you're working through your writer's anxiety instead of leaving us to sweat forever. :-)
person KIKI441
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was so intense. i was on the
edge of my seat when naraku revealed himself.

you have got to update soon because this
will pick at my brain for days until the
next chaptaer is up.
person acr1228
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yikes! Run Sesshomaru run! I hope you update soon!