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OHHHHHHHHHH my God, child can you write or what?!!!!!!!! I felt the pain for Inuyasha right along with him and the anger and fear of Sess, I have not cried over a story in along time and I could not stop while reading this. Please!!! never give up writing you are such a wonder at it. This chapter had me on the edge of my seat, and wringing my fingers while I read it. I can hardly stand the wait to get to the next chapter. God I hope Naraku suffers something awful before he dies(which I hope he does the nasty PIG!!)and I still love Inuyasha being called PUPPY that is just to precious for words. Poor little puppy :O{,sniff,sniff,sob,sob. Job well done on this writing actually that is an understatement you are and incredible writer, never ever apologize for anything thing you write as there is no need for it. You are incredible.!!!! hands down.

i see what you mean by more angst.
thank you. for inuyasha to have been raped again would be really awful.
you have sesshoumaru now grateful to miroku and kagome,
at least so he isnt apt to want to destroy them
and he hates - absolutely hates - naraku. (SO do i)

more things for sesshoumaru to solve
and well, inuyasha needs a lot of tlc
i'm really looking forward to seeing naraku dissolve in sesshoumaru's acid ....
that would be excruciatingly painful...

thank you for updating... and i'm still looking forward to some TLC times between sess and inu...
even briefly? =) we arent laughing much this last two chapters.. so i'm looking forward to a bit of humor...

you have us anxously waiting for the next bit,,

Hi.
I would've hated you if you got Inuyasha raped by Naraku. But leaving him in mental anguish without Sesshoumaru is just plain cruel.

Write more soon.

Hi szaugglaughs,
I LOVE this story. Your writing style and everything.

Although I am still reading chap 20, every page I read, I remember a Depeche Mode song, “It’s not good”.
I can even “see” Sesshoumaru singing it like David Gahan DM (lead vocals) does in the video clip. LOL…

"It's No Good" by Depeche Mode - ULTRA cd
"I'm gonna take my time / I have all the time in the world / To make you mine / It is written in the stars above
The gods decree / You'll be right here by my side / Right next to me / You can run but you cannot hide

Don't say you want me / Don't say you need me / Don't say you love me / It's understood
Don't say you're happy / Out there without me / I know you can't be / 'cause it's no good

I'll be fine / I'll be waiting patiently / Until you see the signs / And come running to my open arms
When will you realize / Do we have to wait till our worlds collide / Open up your eyes / You can't turn back the tide"

I will keep reading so please make me happy :-)

Ahhh, scary!

that was i just was so frightened
i think you showed us naraku
as well as you do everyone else
I'm still shaking

Guahhhh!! At least he knows that it isn't Sesshoumaru but still, I was at the edge of my seat going "ARRGGHHH!!!" More cliffhangers, my poor little heart hurts. I hope Sesshoumaru gets to Kagome on time and they can stop Naraku. Although I wonder if Sesshoumaru is going to blow up at them for leaving Inuyasha all by himself and not noticing him leave? Anyway, as long as Inuyasha gets helped!

I'm sorry MM ended up being such a pain in the ass. :( I've seen a LOT of other stories that don't have a 'proper' disclaimer yet manage to remain unaffected. Mayhap it's just someone with too much time and not enough personal creativity that feels the need to monitor one of THE best stories that ever graced that board, Cannon or Yaoi. It's too bad, but I totally understand your reasoning, and for some strange reason other Well Written Stories that do 'very well' in the replies and overall enjoyment factor seem to suffer this fate. Anyway, enough about that.

Wow! This is getting very very intense and I would like to THANK YOU for not only your fast updates, but also for you strategic use of erotica in this. You have yet to do a "graphic lemon" (though that last bit after the spanking was pretty explicit) and to be honest, it makes the story all the better. You've got VERY good skills at keeping the suspense high while still throwing a bit o the smut out at our pervy selves and it only helps the story as a whole. 10 creativity, 10 enjoyment and a huge THANK YOU for this story. And just think, after this there's still five other fantastic works of yours for me to read over and over (or six if you count the funny which I shall)! May pixie dust and joy scatter from the heavens on you, for your stories certainly bring a bit of that to us! Thanks again! :D Cheers!

I know you said you're not happy with this, but I think it is a good chapter. You really do seem to enjoy putting InuYasha through hell, though. LOL. Anyway, still enjoying this, and hoping that Sesshomaru guts Naraku.

Not bad, though I have to say if Inuyasha gets raped by Naraku, it its totally going to ruin this fic for me.