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Shit! Scarypants! Thing just seem to go from bad to worse for our favourite little Hanyou... Funny how Sesshomaru had to hear the insults falling from the imposter's mouth before he thought about the impact such words might have on his little brother's psyche? I just love how you write him as the bastard he is. No excuses. That's big of Sesshomaru, going to Kagome for help. I just hope it's not too late for Inuyasha. I know the image of Naraku pulling his legs apart gave me the heebie jeebies... Don't leave us in suspense! For a record, your editing is a whole lot better than mine is. I just laugh at my mistakes these days, and then leave them in there...

This is definately an edge of your seat chapter. I wondered when or if Inu was going to figure it out - and I am ultimately glad that Sess finally thought about getting help!

Thanks for sharing.

Someday I'll learn not to read your writing while attempting to eat Doritos, I just bit my tongue when I realized it was Naraku all along!

Gosh, you truly are the genius I thought you were, I never even saw all that coming but I'm dying to see how it turns out and if he actually accepts Sesshy.

*hangs in suspence*

poor baby :3

Ouch...that is very, very angsty. The emotions coming from Inuyasha were very raw and strong. I think you did an excellent job portraying his feelings here after this awful encounter with Naraku. Sesshoumaru's reaction to this is very good but it still makes me want to smack him for hurting Inuyasha the way he did and how easy it was for Naraku to imitate that. It played to all the insecurities and false beliefs Inuyasha has of himself and his relationship with Sesshoumaru.

Angstville really hurts...but I could not help reading it. I hope Sesshoumaru finds Naraku and rips in tiny pieces, he deserves that and more. I also hope Sesshoumaru helps Inuyasha, slowly, very slowly.

Good chapter, it made me sad

O.O! *cries* T_T!!!

OMG, that was sooooooooooo sad! I'm still wiping my eyes! Poor Inuyasha. I don't even know how they could comfort him. It seems like its going to be some time before Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are as close as their future selves are. I just have to say that I truly loooooooooooove this story and I think you are a great author!!! I stalk this site just to see if there are updates to this story! I love that we get to see some true character development, that there is an actual plot to this story, and some angst! I hope I don't have to wait too long for the next update!

ARRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!! Cliffie!!! not cool!!>!>!>!>!>!>!>!!>!!!!!!! aaaaaaannnnnnddd...... im over it.. nice chappies hope you update soon!!!

Oh my god what a sad chapter.
I really hate naraku right now. I hope that Sessy can kill that motherfucker and return to gain Inu´s heart.
I also hope that Inuyasha can somehow feel the angst within Sessy to be able to start to accept him as his mate.

But I want the most is a delicious chapter with lots of lemons between the siblings!! Yay

T_T (sobs), poor Inuyasha, does Sesshoumaru fix him? Please update soon!