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for Uke

by szaugg

person gen
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you.
although you had a brief fight scene, it was satisfying to "hear" sesshoumaru's thoughts and feelings. i can certainly understand him wanting to revive him
only to kill him over and over and over again.

you didnt let inuyasha help, but i guess sesshoumaru neednt the vindication.
that he isnt as useless in protecting his mate.

are we going to see some bright spots next installment?
or will you draw it out, show the slow recovery of inuyasha?
either one is fine with me.

sess does need to go a bit slow. trauma IS hard to get over.

it really is an outstanding fic.

thank you for all your wonderful updates.... and the timing.
you have us anxiously waiting, but at least you dont make us wait very long.
person lunatickat
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm just as dissapointed as Sesshoumaru that Tenseiga didn't revive Naraku so he could die an even longer and more unpleasant death. Oh the sweet angst. I'm glad Sess seems to be taking Inu away for some warm fuzzies, because these last few chapters have just been swimming with angst. Don't get me wrong, I've loved every single bit of this story, even the darkest, most angsty parts. But poor Inu is in some serious need of a hug. I think you did a really amazing job with Inuyasha's reactions to his near rape. In particular, the parts about his toes being too clean were brilliant. Thank you for writing and posting these chapters so quickly. If you ever wonder why you have such loyal fans, it's because you're so loyal to us in return, by not leaving us hanging for weeks on end. You are the best. Looking forward to the next (hopefully slightly happier) chapter!
person DINKA
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
amazing....i read the 24chapters...well, they are actually 23 about the story/..... in two nights....and i found it just amazing

i hope inuyasha overcomes his fears..........although, it is not easy


hope u update soon
person Anon
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24

well, considering how the last chapter ended, I expected more angst, honestly. Still good tho. ^-^
person AlaskanBeauty
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAHOOOOOOOOOO, ding dong the witch is dead !!!! :O} wow, wow, wow, I am so happy sess got that nasty little bastard got what was coming to him, boy I could feel the hate coming from sess, you just get better with each writing, the poor puppy though going to take alot of LOVE :O} to get him through this mess (drooling here ) wondering just how Sess is going to ease his shatterd mind. I am soooo looking forward to the next chapter. Great job as always.
person Mad Maxx Coyote
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter, and thanks for reviewing my story. Good raw emotion in this chapter, and the story is moving along nicely. But I do have to say, its a little pitiful that Inuyasha had nothing to do with Naraku's demise. After all he's been though, to not even wind scar the bastard. Makes Inuyasha look rather ineffectual.
person Mad Maxx Coyote
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Though I totally want to reiterate my enjoyment of this story. Plus you actually update. God I hate that, when your reading a good story and then the author just disappears! I'm really looking foward to the ammount of TLC Sess is gonna have to lay down. Something tells me he's not going to be getting any Inu booty for a while. Though I wonder why Future Sess didnt warn Past Sess about this.
person ayonoi
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Guahh, go Sesshoumaru! At least Naraku is dead but what he said has truth behind it so it is up to Sesshoumaru to show differently to Inuyasha. Poor Inu, I think I really feel for him, the way he thinks all of it is his fault.

Pretty good chapter! Can't wait to see what will happen between Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha since Inu think Sesshoumaru is going to punish him.
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* poor poor Inuyasha. Is Naraku dead or was that just one of his illusions? I hope he is dead.. and by the way great job.

*falls over*
person Sekre
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well at least Naraku is dead.