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for Uke

by szaugg

schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been following this story for a while and wanted to tell you what a great job I think you're doing. I especially like how you set up the relationship between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru so that it's more believable than Sess. just deciding one day he's madly in love with his brother. Great work, keep it up.
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15 review
O.O



Chapter 16 review

LMFAO!!! I love this part:
“Ginta, help, he’s gonna kill me!” Hakkaku whimpered, ducking back behind Kagome.”
“Who? Kouga or Sesshoumaru?” Ginta whimpered back, and joined him in his hiding spot.
BUWHA!



Chapter 17 review

O.O HOLY FUCKING HELL!!! (I dropped a twinkie in my lap; I swear! That’s what it is!!)



Chapter 18 review

Oh god… I love the pillow talk XDXD



Chapter 19 review

LMFAO… ahh, that’s a great way to put it. The Super Sesshoumaru Sex finger! XD

Ahh, poor Miroku... being misinterpreted and all. Lmao. That was so awesome.



Chapter 20 review

Err. (kept reading… oh god I can’t remember what happened I’m too addicted to trying to finish this X_X)



Chapter 21 review

Holy fuck! Naraku’s pretending to be Sesshomaru isn’t he!! THAT BASTARD!!



Chapter 22 review

(gives up and reviews every other chapter)



Chapter 23 review

OMG!! (starts to cry) Is he broken!?! (sobs) Sesshomaru better have found and KILLED that bastard Naraku!! ARGHH!!



Chapter 24 review

Oh goooddd. Now he’s gonna be soooo broken cause of the almost slaying of Kagome.. X_X (sobs)



Chapter 25 review

OH GOD.

Update! T_T


-DM (muwha, told ya I'd review every chapter...almost... o.O;;)
person LadyWolf
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry i am late I was sick. ut I just read very chapter I missed and....WOW!! *dances* Narnaku died he's died YAY!!! BUt my poor Inuyasha please tell me sess can fix this I mean He should be happy... well till next time!!! ^_^
person Azalea J.
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I understand completely what you mean about rape- and with Naraku, that had to be doubly horrible for Inuyasha (It was painful to read!), but now I can see it possible for Sesshoumaru to maybe worm his way into our little hanyou's heart. Please continue- it's too cute to end here! *Sits staring at her screen waiting for an update*
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well... It's taken me about three days to read your story, reading it around doing my chores and what not...



I LOVE IT!!!


I think that Sesshy is actually learning how to deal with Inuyasha and that Inuyasha is actually learning how to be with Sesshy! I can't wait for the next chapter! *squee* I love your story and I simply can't wait to read more!
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It has everything: drama, angst, depth, believable characters and story line, laughs, fluff - and I am sure it will be really hot when we get there :o) I think I am now converted to yaoi (I started out with "This is gonna be fun", loved your work and moved on to "Death or little Death" and "Uke" - all I can say is wow! :o)
person Anon
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey Love the newest chapter an can't wait to rea what you do next!!
person Inari
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND HOW ON EDGE IT MAKES ME WHEN YOU DON'T UPDATE WITHIN AT LEAST 2 DAYS!!!!!!!......sorry I'm just really looking forward to your next chapter. I would like for you to keep this story as your top priority but if you get time plz update Other Side Of Kazaana...
person acr1228
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! You have me so spoiled with your frequent updates! I love the mix of angst and humor in this story. And I really like your Kagome. She doesn't have to be evil for it to be a S/I fic! A lot of authors don't get that. She is a very kind person, but she also tends to WAY over use the beads.
person dac720
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ALL RIGHT!!! Finally Sess lets Inuyasha know with no uncertainty that he cares about him as his mate, though I doubt Inu will see it that clearly being the poor traumatized puppy he is at the moment. As usual I love the writing style, it provides a deep emotional insight to the characters without drowning the reader in unnecessary words. I can’t wait to see how Inuyashas going to act around the more openly loving version of big brother/mate.