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for Uke

by szaugg

person miststalker
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great, I'm glad your not falling into the plot hole of having rape victims be cured by the magical SMEX. I hope you update soon.
schedule April 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well....I FOUND YOU! Um no I'm not some crazed stalker, I started reading this story on yaoi!gallery and recognized your s/n from a comment on a review you made here so I did a little looking. I must say that despite the few errors in grammar or spelling (Which by the way I would be happy to help you with, I'd love to be your beta that sounds a little pervy doesn't it) you have written a fic that not only provides an interesting read but is also so well written that it draws in the reader. This is saying alot considering the fact that I have ADHD and the attention span of a gnat! I hope your computer gets fixed soon so you can update both here and at y!gallery. Oh, on that site I go by Shinimegamisan. I would have used that here but it was taken >_< Anyway, great story and I looke forward to reading more!
person Chelle82
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey thanks for the email!. I'm glad to have found this story. Its a real emotional rollercoaster. I just feel so bad for Inuyasha right now. But you said that there will be a happy ending, so I'm looking forward to it.
person lunatickat
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
See, this is why I love you. Not only do you write the best stories and update them super regularly, but when you can’t update immediately, you always let us know why. And even when you have an unbelievably legitimate reason to be stressed out and fed up (Sorry to hear about your computer by the way. Hope it feels better soon!), you still feel bad for your readers. Don’t worry though; I don’t think anybody thought you were going to abandon your story. It is totally worth the wait.

Oh, and uh, since I somehow forgot to review chapter 24, let me just say that you are doing a wonderful job. I don’t think you are making Inuyasha’s recovery go too fast because he is likely someone who has a high level of resilience to traumatic events. So while his breakdown is perfectly understandable, the fact that he was functioning so well after all his past traumatic events (relatively speaking of course) seems to imply that he is just one of those individuals who can manage to keep going no matter what life throws at him. So don’t worry too much about speedy recoveries, at least not in Inu’s case. And the fact that he has some support from Sess this time makes it all the more reasonable. Anyway, now that the psych major in me has had her say, I look forward to seeing Inu back to his old belligerent and brash self sometime soon. Keep up the good work!
person HeartStar
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god I feel bad for inu but Sesh is so good right now. The way you wrote it was very good. I can`T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS. hOW DOSE THIS SITE WORK DOSE IT SAY WHEN THERE IS AN UPDATE OR NOT?

LARA
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(chapter 10 review)

LMAO!!! Sesshomaru... brain damaged... oh god XDXDXD

I should really be studying for my math test... this is so your fault for telling me where this was! (not really, I shouldn't have avidly been checking Y!Gallery for messages from you XD)

Ahh, this is so amusing, I especially love Sesshomaru making himself all aroused and not having a hand to take care of it... oh god, and don't let me forget about him forming his little travel cloud and then plummeting to the earth cause he lost his train of thought!! BUWHAHAHAHA!!!! So brilliant and SOO fucking hilarious! XD Ahh. Okay. (goes to read chapter 11). I think I'll read the next chapter and review and then read the rest tomorrow if I can (really needs to study... is so gonna fail X_X)

GREAT FUCKING JOB! LOVE IT!


-DM
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(chapter 11 review)

OMG. Miroku... explain sex... oh god... gay sex!... to Inuyasha! XDXD Priceless, and how you had went about it... XDXDXD

Ahh, that's so horrible what Inuyasha had to go through! T_T (wants to kill the bastard! Ahh) I'm so wondering if Sesshomaru will ever find out about Inuyasha having been raped... Part of me hopes so, so he can know fully what his mate's gone through. Hmm.

Oh, and I so lied. I have to read the next chapter... (is so gonna fail test T_T)

Great job again!!


-DM
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(chapter 12 review)

omg. Sessh knows (about Inuyasha being raped) but seems to not feel a thing about it! THAT BASTARD! I WANNA SMACK THE HELL OUTTA HIM!!

And holy shit, Sesshomaru's gonna spank Inuyasha?! Damnit, Miroku and his big, fat mouth! oh god, and Kouga's involved now?! X_X lmao.

(continues to read and more than likely fail test) Yay!


-DM
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(chapter 13 review)

AHAH!! Sweet release, is all I have to say on Inuyasha's behalf...at least the good part of it. XD

Ah, I absolutely love a jealous Sesshomaru, though what he might do to Inuyasha cause he's so brain damanged (lmao) doesn't sit too well with me. Hmm.

(reads on)


-DM
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(chapter 14 review)

O.O



-DM