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Welcome back! The chapter is kinda sad, it is so hard for Sesshoumaru to understand what is going with Inuyasha, the is not used to someone to express the feelings. I liked the little acknowledgements here and there in Sesshoumaru's mind for Inuyasha. I hope he is able to help his mate and other people realize what Inuyasha needs to be feel safe.

Thanks for letting me know you are in lj, I added you! Looking forward to the next chapter.

good to know you have an lj account. will look you up and take you up on your offer.
vix, silence, snow, and doggieearlover (inuyasha writers are all there, and yup. i've friended them too. am not too snazzy with lj but i manage to stumble along.
what i like there is the use of tags... i dont know what universes you write about aside from inuyasha, but lj has an easy way of putting them together. a few friends there have a separate lj for their fiction pieces (me, i just lump them together since i dont have a lot of fics anyway... just the rare piece .

and you can put a page up to put the links for your other stories! that's a big plus for readers. you might want to take a look at how doggieearlover has sent up her lj for ideas.)

and now for uke. thank you for updating. am glad your computer concerns are over.
serious stuff now for uke, but nicely shaping up.
i like the idea of sess unsure - as he is hardly unsure of anything else -
and i like the way you're handling the signals that sess is privy to, as inu's mate.
he's (sess) unsure, he's irritated that he is unsure, and he wants inu better, even,
if as he says to himself, it is just to ease the physical distress that he feels when inu is distressed.

i like the thought that inu now wants signs of affection from sess (it is quite a confidence builder).. and waiting for that moment when inuyasha realizes (i hope you deliciously (as in not too fast?) develop it.. since naraku's gone now - and i'm so happy about that.

and you know, you're doing exactly that... doing it slow (all the more, shall we say, passionate at the end?). thanks for the update!

i am enjoying hos you are developing this story... i hope inuyasha and sesshomaru will get along in next chapters...or at least, they will talk about the past situations!!!

poor inuyasha...it is hard to trust in sesshomaru..not only after naraku's incident, but also for those years of sesshomaru insulting him...how could you trust in someone that made you so miserable?!!!!!

I think InuYasah's reaction is very realistic. I feel so terrible for him, and love that Sesshomaru is realizing he's part of hte solution to make InuYasha feel better. Also, I'm so glad that you got your computer fixed. Mine died a few days before Christmas. I can sympathize.

Wow. I am just blown away by the way that you were able to portray Inuyasha's fear and Sesshoumaru's anger towards the rest of the group. Inuyasha is afraid to be left alone with Sesshoumaru or by himself, and yet he fears his friends just as much.
It is very heart-wrenching to read because you write it so well.

And the best part is that they are all STILL in character. Have I told you how much I love your writing? 'Cause I do. Keep up the Excellent story telling!!!!! ;)

It's about time you updated! I thought that I was going to be old and gray by the time you did. God, I cant wait to read more.

Yaaa! Your back! I missed you! Great chapter, please update again soon! I love you!

I like ur story, but so far--the way u have put Inu in a really bad situation is really bothering me. I mean-he's now been bitten by Sess-whom he hates with really good reason--but there's not alot he can do about it 'cuz he doesn't want Sess to kill Kagome and his friends. I really don't like this aspect--I mean---Sess is going to rape him--he already has molested him w/ the finger thing----how would u feel is u were in this situation? Sess is making poor Inu a slave and as the story is going on--it just keeps getting worse. I mean-Miroku is having a blast---Kouga is also-I mean, ur even letting Kouga humiliate poor Inu and noone is doing a thing about it? Sess only gets mad when Kouga threatens Inu---but otherwise--he's alot to laugh it up at Inu. And why would Kagome stick up for Kouga when he's being this mean? Unless she really is that much of a bitch? Don't get me wrong--I like ur idea and have all u have up sp far--I LOVED Sess getting his ass kicked---he soooooo deserves that. But u have to let Inu have a chance to get out of this if he decides----let him at least beat the living shit out of Sess or something----Inu would never be a wimp like this--I really don't like him having to be uke---if he choose to w/ Sess-that's dif---then it's hot! But here-u've pretty much taken away EVERYTHING from Inu---what chance of happiness does he have with his so called "friends" laughing at him and he's stuck with a psycho as a mate? I really hope this aspect of the story gets better---because I like ur idea and ur style of writing.Hope u don't mind the honesty---I don't like this---but this aspect-I don't know if u even realize how badely ur treating Inuyasha in this story--if this cointinues--all I can feel is that Inu will have to kill himself to escape Sess--or else endure decades of slavery. Thanx-and look forward to reading where u take this!! :)

what is going to happen next? more please

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IM DYING HERE...it's been weeks and I keep checking everyday for an udate I don't know how many times I can keep reading the last chapter(although I do it everyday :O} paaalease do an update soon before I kill the dog...(just kidding)