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Will there be hot boys fighting in you next chapter? Pretty please! Great chapter. All that self-loathing and fear... Thanks for writing it from Inuyasha's point of view. I missed the little cutie and his filthy mouth. Rin was absolutely hilarious, whether it was intentional or not. You had me in stitches. Sesshomaru doing his very best caveman impression at the end of it just topped it off. More please.

This chapter had me moving down that spiral of pain along with Inuyasha. Damn, that hurt!! Rin was wonderful; really nice characterization. She had Sesshoumaru blushing...lol Maybe Sesshoumaru should let Inuyasha meet Jaken now - then he could take care of two problems at once. Inuyasha can blow off some steam and pulverize Jaken for the 'pretty boy' comment that Rin's logic arrived at, and which would also take care of Sesshoumaru's need to beat on the kappa for not keeping his mouthy 'humans do stupid things' thoughts to himself around Rin. Thank you for updating! Happy 4th of July to you!

This is a great story. Thanks for writing it. I keep looking for more updates all the time.

another bridge chapter?
i'm glad you updated this.. we have been waiting.
thank you!

2 things happened here:
1. inuyasha meets rin and is pleasantly surprised even as he is ... angered
that sess would treat a human better than him - a half demon
2. they (sess and inu) will finally be alone and can begin to adjust to what happened with inu

i have always thought rin was good for sess, and will be good for inu.
hmmm. looking forward to the alone time for sess and inu. i dont think there will be a lemon (although i hope for a lime), but there will be a chance to argue and clear the air. i want to see that!

I love little Rin. She is so innocent and cute. I love the pace of this story so far. I hope that it continues like this. It's like reading a novel that you cant put down.

Hurra! new chappie! cookies!! update soon!

Ah, YAYYYY. I hope you update soon. It's freakin' good. =]

are you adding more to this. it would be great. i like how you did this story. it had all the making of of a great movie. i hope you do add more. this was one of the beat story i have read on this site. looking forward to reading more of your writing's. keep up the great work..

i think this is my favorite sesshoumaru/inuyasha story! I love it, the whole idea of it as well as the way it was writen the way to made everything. I just reread it for crist's sakes, and i can find no fault or anything the way annoying or just not good. everything was wonderful. Either way i am not going to harras you for an update as you said you plan on finishing your stories and really what more can we ask of you? Just wanted to give you some extra praise for such a wonderful piece of writing that i very much enjoyed.

Wow do not apologize for this chapter, I thought it was wonderful and what incite to how Shes is coming around with his feelings. I truly believe until he gets in touch with his true feelings he can't help the puppy. It was a great read and as always am looking forward to the next chapter. You are such a wonderful writer.