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AHHH! You updated before me! I only have 12 pages done! Man now I really gotta move it. Annnnyway, nice chapter, Inuyasha's reaction to Rin was interesting, and maybe its just me but I can't help but wanted to see Inuyasha actually hurt Sesshomaru, and not just Sesshomaru 'let' Inuyasha whack him a good one. I can't help but think causing Sesshomaru some pain might just help Inuyasha in the long run. I mean he already pretty much wants to beat the crap out of something.....though Koga might also do....yeah beat the crude out of the wolf. Not as good as Sess but its getting somewhere. I think Inuyasha really needs to do some ass kicking just to get himself out of his mindset. All he seems to be thinking is how worthless and weak he is, seems like he needs a reminder on just how powerful he can be. Just a thought.

i was so excited when i saw you had the next
chapter up. leave to rin to make things a
little better. and when rin started to
repeat the swear word inuyasha had said. i
could just see sesshomaru's brow twitching
as his little girl was cursing. that was
too funny. so, now that sesshomaru has taken
inuyasha away from the others will he scream
out all his rage and hate and hurt as he
attacks sesshomaru. you know what mean. like
telling him all of the pain he has felt inside
since the day sesshomaru turned his back on
him as a child? i am so looking forward to
the next chapter.

ugh! So, so good! But it's not enough, I say! I love Rin! I love Inuyasha! I love Sesshoumaru! And I especially love how you write them!

i really liked this chapter. the emotion you convey is so powerful. aside from a few small typo's, the flow is good. i'm g;ad you updated. please don;t forget the other story-this is going to be a pain in the ass. that one is my favorite

Chapter 28

I wouldn't worry about the formatting issues you were having. The IMPORTANT thing is that you updated, because this is a good story.

Glad to see Rin was able to penetrate his fear just a little bit. I think you having Sess bring Inu to a place where he can scream, rant and holler to destress will not only be interesting to read, but good for him to do.

As always, enjoyed reading!

Don’t worry I came back with my shield. There might be a couple of tear tracks down the front though…

I don’t know why you’ve felt so-so about the last couple of chapters. I think you are doing a wonderful job. This is a tough subject you are tackling and you are managing to do so without making anyone seem out of character. It was pretty gut-wrenching to look inside Inu’s head but I think most everyone can agree that after so many traumatic and awful experiences Inu would be acting and thinking pretty much the way you have imagined. And I just love the way you are doing Sess. I think it’s true to his character to not know what to do to comfort Inu so instead he tries to distract him through anger. And I think a huge angry vent-fest is coming up sometime in the near future for Inu and it’s probably something he truly needs. Maybe after he vents some of that anger and pain he can start to figure out what the soft feeling is coming from Sess. Just knowing that someone has those kinds of soft feelings towards him will probably help his recovery. And I LOVE the part Rin is playing in the story. Her perpetual enthusiasm and high-spirits partners well with Inu’s caustic and ill-tempered demeanor. I think Sess had the right idea introducing those two officially. It was a very cute break to the angst-fest.

Thanks for the updates. Sorry I haven’t reviewed in a while. It wasn’t you it was me. ( I mean that in the non break-up sense, in which the person that states it really does think it was you. ;) ) I hope to read more soon. I know your juggling a lot of stories right now but try not to let them stress you out. Writing should be fun. Hopefully you have as much fun writing as I do reading. Which is a lot, by the way.

Your faithful peon,

luna

yay you updated. man this was a great chapter! reading this was like a release that I've been holding from the last chapter. Kagome should know better. and rin was such a good idea. I hope that she would be able to help in Inuyasha's healing prosess. I had more to say by how about one word and nine letters? FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and thanks for getting MM.org updated as well. as always great work wonderful job and UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

SHIVONNE

Awww! Rin has won him over! Poor Inuyasha, does he get his chance to kick ass?

Well the story was awesome as usual-- I actually was almost in tears reading it, so emotional. And then this: 'Let go! Let go, you bastard! You ass-licking piece of moldy foot rot! Fucking deer-loving cunt! Asshole son of a putrid, disease ridden whore!' and I fell over laughing, OMG you have the wittiest sense of humor I have ever encountered and it shows up so beautifully in your stories when you least expect it!

great Job cant wait for more!

i like this chapter... very insighthfull!!!

about inuyasha: he probably won't trusth on his mate 'ever'....will he? and i understand him, after all...sesshomaru made his life miserable for too many years that inuyasha is going to think of him as the same bastard of always...even though, sesshomaru is probably changing!!!

about sesshomaru: he needs to change hsi tactics to earn inuyasha's trust....but, it's sesshomaru...i wouldn't expect less.... he is in a big challenge to earn inu's trust....GOOD LUCK & that KAMI BE WITH HIM!!!!

hope to read more soon!!!