AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Uke

by szaugg

person gen50
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i re-read the last chapter. i'm hoping for a nicer chapter next time.
maybe a nice sexy one?
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwww... that was a really sweet ending.......
person kesha
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you Thank you I am so happy to see the update.
person ladytokyo aka shivonne
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I made a great long ass review for this before and it didn't put it up. so I'm reviewing again but shorter. Damn that is so true 28/29 chapters and no lemon wow, that's something for the books. And I must say that Sesshomaru is taking this whole situation well, even though he doesn't know what to do. I sango is sick for thinking the perv hehe would even do that to rin she's the demon lord ward for cryin out loud what faith she has in him.
Jaken is an idiot but fun to hurt, sesshomaru is an idoit but aleast he's trying, Kagome is a idiot because well hell she is, what no one's going come back ok from a near rape after 24 hours dumbass! at least the monk and keade understands he's not ok. and I don't know how you come up with all the things that come out of Inuyasha's mouth. I'm still laughing over sheep fucking ass ugly monrgal! You're more fucked up than a pox ridden geisha!!!! I think that it's cute that sesshy gets jeslousy, like to see more of that. At least sesshomaru's learning and seeing to his mate's needs. and the scene at the stream was funny all I can think of slow motion and sexy music playing at the sametime that would would really him and boner can you say inuyasha gone wild. lol Sesshomaru self-control is really at it's test, he might end up with blue balls. and well he's learning that a great feat. Since Sesshomaru has a mental connection perhaps if they both sleep would he be able to see what Inuyasha's nightmares are? or the thing's that happen in his life. that would be a good guilt trip, there is so much he has to learn, as well as Inuyasha not life is not pain. but for now "you're safe. No more pain today" awe um wonder what the morning after going to be like. Ok so plz update sooner, and how come you don't update on mm.org that's all I can remember now post ya later.

shivonne aka ladytokyo
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(sobs) Oooooooooooooooh, I loved that chapter (can't believe I fell off the face of the earth *aka lost sight of UKE* X_X)!!! I hope you update again soon (when you can, of course... NOW! XD) because I'm loving the developing feelings and discovery of said feelings that Sesshomaru and Inuyasha are going through! I hope more comes soon!! (is so addicted to this fic) YOSH!


-DM
person Rawben
schedule August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww! so sweet! i hope he's on the way to recovery now... that he's destroyed every demon in a 10 mile radius. ;) also: worried, confused, aroused sess is the best sess. ;)
person dac720
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I cannot help but feel bad for poor Sesshy, he’s trying so hard to be nice but his mentally scarred mate wont believe his feelings toward him can change. Maybe Inuyasha should pay more attention to the emotions he’s reading from his mate than focusing on what Naraku had said. Then again Sesshomaru could try apologizing for the past.
person LynLin
schedule August 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHH I hope you update soon! Freakin' awesome is what this is. Fluff fluff and more fluff. No smut yet. hahaha good for you!! I'll be waiting!
person ayachan
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I love this story to death. It's just so funny- err.. not what's happening right now.. but the chapters before the whole Naraku incident. That was some funny shit. *sigh* but it's nice to see Sesshomaru becoming nicer. Interesting chapter! Can't wait to see how Sesshomaru continues to help Inuyasha get over this tramatic experience! Please update soon and good luck! ^^

haha, btw, the first time I read this story, you were already 28 chapters into the it, so I stayed up the whole night reading it! Didn't get to bed until 7:00 in the morning. Thank god it was a weekend or else I would have been so screwed, lol.
person azalea
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was just so sweet... And mean at the same time. Leaving your readers angsting over what's going to happen next- how cruel.
But the way you've woven this pairing... and the writing, it gets me every time- it's snappish and blunt in its own way- and gets the message across even if you don't come right out and say it.
I can't wait for the next chapter; hopefully Sesshoumaru will be able to convince Inuyasha of his pure intentions?