rate_review Reviews

I have to say, I swore to myself to never again read fanfiction. Especially not InuYasha fanfiction. This story completely changed my mind. Even if it is the most awkward pairing that I would never even think of reading, your story makes me love that pairing so much. Bless your heart for being of the less than 1% of the population that actually doesn't show bias in your stories. Every time I read a story, there is always some sort of bias towards a character, or characters and even if you have a distaste towards a character, it's hard to tell (except for Jaken, but no one likes him anyways) the angstful drama in your story made me cry a little it was so emotional. Please don't stop the drama/angst, it's what makes your story and plotline so amazing and breathable. The only thing I would have to say is that you must have a lot of fun with swear words, sometimes it's a little too much, but it adds an element of humor to the plot. Please keep writing and thank you for reinstating my faith in fanfiction.

Please update!!!!!!!! whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa sniff please please please please please. or update something. ok I guess I'm done whining
so how are things going last time I talk to you, you are your family was sick I guess things are better now hm.
talk to ya later

ladytokyo aka shivonne

Great story. I'm addicted. Update as soon as you can. =)

eeeeeeeeewwwwwwwww I wonder what Inu did to Sess's armour!! I love Rin's little subltle way of making Inu feel guilty!!! Poor Sess doesn't realise his own guilt trip about Inu's life is causing him real physical pain because he's so out of touch with himself! I did re-read this story a few times even with the revisions you made.

This is one hell of a story and I look forward to seeing it to the end! I pray your muse gets insperation soon!

This is such a great fic. I really like you exploring Inuyasha's reactions to Rin. On the one hand, she's a little girl and he's definitly got a gentle side. On the other hand, seeing Rin with Sesshomaru has to be even worse for him than Kikyo's betrayal. I mean, he only 'had' Kikyo for, what, a year or two at most? Where as he's dealt with Sesshomaru's scorn and rejection for decades, and suddenly he's aquired this little human.

ANyway, i figured it was past time for me to pester you again.

OMG!!!!! GAH!!!! Another story that I'm freakin' hooked on and that I can't get enough of! XD You're too good at this writing stuff, lady. You're cliffies could give someone a heart attack! LIKE ME!!! lol Literally, I was about the clock "Next Chapter" and when I saw it not there I was just sooooo depressed... Like now XD I don't even WATCH this anime on TV, and yet you make this characters SO believable and SO realistic! The emotions are flawless and not at all inconsistent like my own writing tends to be XD GAH!!! I'm horny... >< LOL! Please... UPDATE SOON OR I'LL KEEL OVER!!!! lol

This story is freaking brilliant! I'm such a huge Rin fan, I love that you made Sesshy and Inuyasha fit together so perfectly, without just dissing Rin right out of the story. Jakken most certainly is a little twerp, but you made Rin as adorable and heart-warming as ever! XD <3 and ZOMG this story is just beautifully told! Everyone's so perfectly in character, though you're really mean to Miroku... not that he doesn't deserve it LMAO! this is beautiful! PLZ WRITE MORE SOON! I love this story so much! =D it's perfect! I should have commented every chapter, cuz I forgot a lot of the things that I so wanted to say were amazing, so I'll just say the simplest answer, which is very true, the whole thing is brilliantly PERFECT!!!! XD well done! <3

I'm distressed, my comment was a lot longer than that. T_T so I'll just add that basically what I said (in much greater words) was that this story is freaking BRILLIANT, PERFECTLY in character, and well done! Plz write more soon! <3

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Sometimes the best cure is blood, i have to agree with that. Sesshoumaru kind of reminds me of a real dog, when the female is in heat and being all vicious and the male dog just follows her around waiting for the right moment. :) I enjoyed that part where Sesshoumaru was thinkn about why he bit inuyasha and how he wanted none of the memories to link him with naraku.....i wonder if naraku is really dead. I mean he has been "dead" so many times it makes me wonder. Either way wonderful chapter. I love seeing the inuyasha sesshoumaru sees, he is diffrent from the one everyone else does i think. *thinks bathing scene*

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Ah so good. You must know you are a tease. InuYashas dream was yummy....Now I am mad with everyone that had to show up and ruin it all. I wonder how much you changed from before...if i should go back and read it all over agian. It is such a good story--in an almost sickening way its almost TOO good. Ah I love it. I like to see all this teasing as like really good foreplay. It will make the moment Inu and Sesshoumaru have sex that much sweeter. Or maybe I am trying to console myself. hope the urge to write this story hit you and you can help but get a new chapter out. I really want to know what happens next.