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by szaugg

person keomah
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Kouga and Miroku have problems. And about time...lol...they should be suffering too. Inuyasha needs the company! I can just imagine them sitting around the campfire moaning about their problems and getting into a 'my problem is worse' contest.

That whole scene with Jaken was funny as hell!! I've always suspected he had the hots for Sesshoumaru...lol...it must have been a fantasy come true for Jaken. Cleaning a dirty dog...ack! Truly disturbing image to think about but really funny!

Poor Inuyasha melts down from his non-stop string of misery. And it seems like Sesshoumaru is finally starting to admit to himself that he has feelings for Inuyasha. Sesshoumaru must be about ready for some kind of crash landing too, it has been awhile since he's slept or eaten. And trying to deal with both his emotions and Inu's has got to be draining him. Though just getting Inuyasha into the hot springs willingly shouldn't be too hard. They both stink to high heaven with swamp mud. Will they get a chance to recover at a hot spring without out any 'help' from their respective packs? Somehow, I doubt it! Jaken with his big beak will be screeching for cleaning supplies for his idol back in the village. Looking forward to your next chapter!
person acr
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! so glad you haven't abandoned this fic! I'm glad Inuyasha finally 'won' one! BTW, where's kohaku, kanna, kagura, etc.
person acr
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! so glad you haven't abandoned this fic! I'm glad Inuyasha finally 'won' one! BTW, where's kohaku, kanna, kagura, etc.
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update i have so much hope and can't wait for you toi continiue the story so please plsease update
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! YAY!!!! I'm SO happy that you updated this story! It must be terribly stressful having to go back and update more to your multiple storyies, as well as rewarding when you get praise. Which you absolutely deserve! Even though there may not be any sex in this update, I'm still completely hooked by all the emotion and vivid detail you put into it. You're so consistant with your characters' personalities and emotional states, I wish that I could figure out how to do that as well XD Thank you SO much for updating this story, mate ^_^ It brightened my gloomy day!
person sammy
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude you have to update i love this freaking story so much lol i havent laughed like this in weeks maybe months lol please update!!
person Skya
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First time reading your fic and have to say it pretty awesome. Starting off I have to say your characterizations are very consistant. I love how the plot going and I can't wait to see what happens next. (^_^)
person jessica
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! An update!!!!!! Im so happy!!!!!!!!! LOL. Well It's clear to say I love this story... Well I love most of ur stories so thats just kind of a given. But I've been dieing 4 an update 4 this 4 a while! I've wanted it so bad that I kept checking back and forth between here and y!gallery... and I hate reading stories on there... But as always uve done a great job, and Im already planning a wedding lol. Ok I'll stop being creepy now, and just leave saying that ur amazing!
person alex
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UR A GENIOUS!!!!
I'M SO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!!
I LOVE IT WHEN WRITERS DON'T MAKE INU AND SESSH FALL IN LOVE WITH EACH OTHER QUICKLY
I LIKE IT WHEN IT TAKES TIME
AND U DID THAT.....UR SO AWSOME!!!
I'LL BE WAITING FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER....SO KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!!