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for Callous Heart

by KelseyFantasy

schedule June 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I would gladly be your beta if you're still interested let me know at angelicsheila1978@yahoo.com ja ne!
person Nahau
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting fic. I can't wait to see what you will do next. Also, this first chapter will keep me reading, thanks.
person oxcab
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
its good ^_^ update soon
person Mmoirai
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay! Let's have more chapters!
person Sess's Lover
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESE, PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESE write more soon. Great start. You have me right were you want me.
person animegirl007
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You have a really interesting start, but be careful of your English usage....you used witch instead of which, and there instead of their...small things like that counts in stories.

NOW THIS IS A FLAME!!!! REPEAT THIS IS NOT A FLAME!!!!!!!!!

I really like your story so far, and I can't wait to read more.....

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